[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 59/68] Review world-check help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 9617b68942830dae2d01e7715c84f501e7ac45a8
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 21:42:18 2013 +0100

    Review world-check help page

 help/C/world-check.page |   24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/world-check.page b/help/C/world-check.page
index 2a3560d..7735e43 100644
--- a/help/C/world-check.page
+++ b/help/C/world-check.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#world-clock"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,28 +15,28 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Check the time of sunrise and sunset in a certain city, and other
-    details.</desc>
+    <desc>Check the sunrise and sunset times for a city.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Additional details in a world clock</title>
+  <title>What else do world clocks show?</title>
 
-  <p>The world clock for a particular city displays the time of sunrise and
-  sunset in that city. It also tells you if it is <gui>Yesterday</gui> or
-  <gui>Tomorrow</gui> in the selected city with respect to your system time.</p>
+  <p>Apart from checking the time, you can also view the sunrise and sunset
+  times for today. You will also see if the city is a day behind or ahead of
+  you.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To get more information about a certain city:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">World</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select a city of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>Select a city to view more information about it.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-<!--TODO : Check if sunrise and sunset time is still displayed in IST instead
-     of the local time-->
-
 </page>