[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 28/39] Review world-remove help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit e27ae8c9834025e0b0a4c87d45cdc261361a75e5
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 21:29:25 2013 +0100

    Review world-remove help page

 help/C/world-remove.page |   27 ++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/world-remove.page b/help/C/world-remove.page
index 5c85626..79d0c3b 100644
--- a/help/C/world-remove.page
+++ b/help/C/world-remove.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#world-clock"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,36 +15,33 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Delete a world clock which you no longer need.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Remove a world clock</title>
-  <p>If you no longer need one of your world clocks, you can delete it.</p>
+
+  <p>You can delete clocks which you no longer need.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">World</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Right click on the world clock of your choice. Alternatively, you
-      can also press the button with a tick mark on the top right corner.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Mark all the world clocks you wish to delete by either clicking or
-      right clicking on them.</p>
+      <p>Right click on the world clock. You can press the button with a tick
+      mark in the top right corner and select the clock which you want to
+      delete.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Delete</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Done</gui> button to finish.</p>
-    </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="info">
-    <p>The <gui style="button">Delete</gui> button shows up only when you have
-    marked at least one clock for deletion.</p>
-  </note>
+  <p>You can select more than one clock at a time for deletion.</p>
 
 </page>