[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 21/39] help: Modify stopwatch.page



commit c1cab84fa33c686cf6989b22be36ad1726b5d971
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sat Sep 14 21:52:03 2013 +0530

    help: Modify stopwatch.page
    
    Reword some steps. Title the steps list.

 help/C/stopwatch.page |   10 ++++++----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/stopwatch.page b/help/C/stopwatch.page
index 3d6e3bc..a67edab 100644
--- a/help/C/stopwatch.page
+++ b/help/C/stopwatch.page
@@ -22,11 +22,12 @@
   <title>Clock your best times</title>
 
   <p>A stopwatch can be used to measure the different parts of a task while
-  also keeping track of the time taken to finish the whole task. It is often
-  used by athletes to measure the time taken to cover each lap and the time
-  taken to cover the entire distance of the race.</p>
+  also keeping track of the total time taken to finish the whole task. It is
+  often used by athletes to measure the time taken to cover each lap and the
+  time taken to cover the entire distance of the race.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To use the stopwatch:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Stopwatch</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
@@ -52,7 +53,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>You can use the <gui style="button">Reset</gui> button to reset the
-      stop clock or when you have finished using the stopwatch.</p>
+      stop clock at any time. You can also press it when you have finished
+      using the stopwatch.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 


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