[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help] Review timer help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit a65646eafa3952c3ae03db7861a4688902d6dfda
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 23:24:28 2013 +0100

    Review timer help page

 help/C/timer.page |   24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/timer.page b/help/C/timer.page
index f3397e9..6669507 100644
--- a/help/C/timer.page
+++ b/help/C/timer.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#timer"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,33 +15,33 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Set time limits to a task.</desc>
+    <desc>Use a countdown to be notified when a time period has elapsed.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set the timer</title>
 
-  <p><app>Clocks</app> has a timer that can be set to notify you after a time
-  period of your choice. When you set the timer, it counts down by second from
-  the set time and notifies you when the countdown reaches zero.</p>
+  <p>Set the time for a second by second countdown to zero. You will be
+  notified when the countdown has finished.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To set the timer:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Timer</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Set your time period, by choosing the right hour, minute and second
-      values.</p>
+      <p>Set your time for the countdown.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Start</gui> button to start the
-      countdown.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Start</gui> to commence the countdown.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>When the countdown reaches zero, a notification message will be displayed
-  at the bottom of your screen, along with a tiny beep.</p>
+  <p>You will be notified when the countdown reaches zero.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>Once the timer has started its countdown, you can press the