[seahorse/mallard-help] help: Modify misc-key-backup.page

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit cb942b2737bb4c395003196a67fa936b193035f8
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 10 01:23:05 2013 +0530

    help: Modify misc-key-backup.page
    
    Reword bits.
    Remove unnecessary sentences.
    Modify revision tag, deleted the version attribute since it's a little
    useless.

 help/C/misc-key-backup.page |   20 ++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/misc-key-backup.page b/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
index 49b578e..552040f 100644
--- a/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
+++ b/help/C/misc-key-backup.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#misc"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-06-17" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-07-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-07-11" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -17,23 +17,15 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Keep a copy of your keys and certificates to protect them.</desc>
+    <desc>Keep a copy of your keys in an external device.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Securely back-up your keys</title>
 
-  <p>It is always advisable to have a copy of your public keys, private keys
-  and revocation certificates stored safely in an external memory device like a
-  USB. The device should then be kept locked or stored somewhere safe. This way
-  you will always have a copy of the key if your hard disk crashes or if the
-  data on your computer is corrupted in some way, and you can continue to use
-  the external copy of the key.</p>
-
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>Even if your public key has been
-    <link xref="pgp-publish">published</link>, save a copy of it because
-    sometimes a key server may be corrupted or may not be available.</p>
-  </note>
+  <p>It is always advisable to save a copy of your keys on an external memory
+  device like a USB. The device should then be kept locked or stored somewhere
+  safe. This way you will always have a copy of the key if your hard disk
+  crashes or if the data on your computer is corrupted in some way.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To back-up your keys:</title>