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[gnome-user-docs] Update net-* pages for 3.10

commit 45610c97fd1355484112dbb66e1ae1e2f25fe8ee
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Oct 31 22:14:18 2013 +0000

    Update net-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page |   21 ++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page   |   19 ++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page          |   25 ++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page      |   24 ++++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page   |   58 +++++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page      |   50 ++++++++++++++++++---------
 6 files changed, 135 insertions(+), 62 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
index a27084c..5762b96 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-browser.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-browser"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -25,17 +30,21 @@
   <title>Change which web browser websites are opened in</title>
 
   <p>When you click a link to a web page in any application, a web browser will
-  automatically open up to that page. If you have more than one browser
-  installed, however, the page may not open up in the browser you wanted it to
+  automatically open up to that page. However, if you have more than one
+  browser installed, the page may not open up in the browser you wanted it to
   open in. To fix this, change the default web browser:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Details</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Details</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Details</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui>
-      from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
+      <p>Choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side
+      of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Choose which web browser you would like links to be opened in by
@@ -45,7 +54,7 @@
 
   <p>When you open up a different web browser, it might tell you that it's not
   the default browser any more. If this happens, click the <gui>Cancel</gui>
-  button (or similar) so that it doesn't try to set itself as the default
+  button (or similar) so that it does not try to set itself as the default
   browser again.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
index c989ecf..9133621 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-email"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -26,17 +31,21 @@
 
   <p>When you click a button or link to send a new email (for example, in your
   word processing application), your default mail application will open up with
-  a blank message, ready for you to write. If you have more than one mail
-  application installed, however, the wrong mail application might open up. You
+  a blank message, ready for you to write. However, if you have more than one
+  mail application installed, the wrong mail application might open up. You
   can fix this by changing which one is the default email application:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Details</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Details</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Details</gui> and choose <gui>Default Applications</gui>
-      from the list on the left side of the window.</p>
+      <p>Choose <gui>Default Applications</gui> from the list on the left side
+      of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Choose which email client you would like to be used by default by
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index d98eeab..991dc41 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-what-is-ip-address"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -21,6 +22,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -37,16 +42,22 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Find your internal (network) IP address</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or
-      <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left, depending on which network
+      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or
+      <gui>Wired</gui> from the list on the left, depending on which network
       connection you want to find the IP address for.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Your internal IP address will be displayed in the list of
-      information.</p>
+      <p>You will see the IP address for a wired connection on the right, or
+      open the connection details by pressing on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.png" width="16" 
height="16">details</media></gui>
+      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -61,7 +72,7 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>Depending on how your computer connects to the internet, these addresses
-  may be the same.</p>
+  <p>Depending on how your computer connects to the internet, both of these
+  addresses may be the same.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index 2d6c8a5..9622ff4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -20,6 +21,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -40,16 +45,23 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or
-      <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left (depending on which device
-      you want to check).</p>
+      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or
+      <gui>Wired</gui> from the list on the left, depending on which device you
+      want to check.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Your MAC address will be displayed as the <gui>Hardware
-      Address</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Your MAC address will be displayed as the <gui>Hardware Address</gui>
+      on the right for a wired connection, or open the connection details by
+      pressing on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.png" width="16" 
height="16">details</media></gui>
+      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index f9d3098..fbe0628 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-othersedit"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -30,40 +35,51 @@
     <p>Language cleanup, admin -> administrative/administrator. We need some
     standard language. grep for similar.</p>
   </comment>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2013-10-31">Kat</cite>
+    <p>Consider rewriting this page from a "how do I not share connection info
+    with other users" because sharing is the default.</p>
+  </comment>
 
-  <p>If you have set up a network connection but other users on your computer
-  can't connect to it, they probably aren't entering the right settings when
-  they try to connect. For example, if you have a wireless connection, they may
-  not be entering the right wireless security password.</p>
-
-  <p>You can make it so that everyone can share the settings for a network
-  connection once you have set it up. This means that you only need to set it
-  up once, and everyone else on the computer will be able to connect to it
-  without being asked any questions. To do this:</p>
+  <p>When you set up a network connection, all other users on your computer
+  will normally be able to use it. If the connection information is not shared,
+  you should check the connection settings.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or
-      <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left (depending on which network
-      connection you want to change).</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Network Name</gui> drop-down list, select the connection
-      you want everyone to be able to use and then click
-      <gui>Configure</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> from the list on
+      the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Check <gui>Available to all users</gui> and click <gui>Save</gui>. You
-      will have to enter your admin password to save the changes. Only
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin users</link> can do this.</p>
+      <p>Open the connection details by pressing on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.png" width="16" 
height="16">details</media></gui>
+      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Other users of the computer will now be able to use this connection
-      without entering any further details.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the panel on the left side.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>At the bottom of the <gui>Identity</gui> panel, check the <gui>Make
+      available to other users</gui> option to allow other users to use the
+      network connection.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Apply</gui> to save the changes.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>Other users of the computer will now be able to use this connection
+  without entering any further details.</p>
+
+  <note>
+    <p>Any user can change this setting.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
index 15e8e00..4c99958 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-31" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -32,12 +37,18 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>If you can edit a network connection but other users on your computer
-  can't, you may have set the connection to be <gui>available to all
-  users</gui>. This makes it so that everyone on the computer can
-  <em>connect</em> using that connection, but only users
+  can't, you may have set the connection to be <em>available to all users</em>.
+  This makes it so that everyone on the computer can <em>connect</em> using
+  that connection<!--, but only users
   <link xref="user-admin-explain">with administrative rights</link> are allowed
-  to change its settings.</p>
+  to change its settings-->.</p>
+
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2013-10-31">Kat</cite>
+    <p>Anyone can edit the connection in 3.10.</p>
+  </comment>
 
+<!--
   <p>The reason for this is that, since everyone is affected if the settings
   are changed, only highly-trusted (admin) users should be allowed to modify
   the connection.</p>
@@ -47,30 +58,35 @@
   the computer. This way, everyone will be able to manage their own connection
   settings rather than relying on one set of shared, system-wide settings for
   the connection.</p>
+-->
 
   <steps>
-    <title>Make it so that the connection isn't shared any more</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> from the list on
+      the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and select <gui>Wired</gui> or
-      <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left, depending on which
-      connection you want to change.</p>
+      <p>Open the connection details by pressing on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.png" width="16" 
height="16">details</media></gui>
+      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the <gui>Network Name</gui> drop-down list, select the connection
-      you want everyone to be able to manage/edit themselves and then click
-      <gui>Options</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the panel on the left side.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You will have to enter your admin password to change the connection.
-      Only admin users can do this.</p>
+      <p>At the bottom of the <gui>Identity</gui> panel, check the <gui>Make
+      available to other users</gui> option to allow other users to use the
+      network connection.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Uncheck <gui>Available to all users</gui> and click <gui>Save</gui>.
-      Other users of the computer will now be able to manage the connection
-      themselves.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Apply</gui> to save the changes.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
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