[gnome-nibbles] appdata: reword the description a bit



commit e39c1c0dc55cbe8fa737d065753e89e96625199c
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date:   Sun Oct 6 09:35:36 2013 -0500

    appdata: reword the description a bit
    
    * Nit: the word "manuever" twice in the same paragraph is weak
    
    * Probably Nibbles will be restricted to two players per keyboard

 data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in b/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
index ad2be27..2311573 100644
--- a/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
+++ b/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
    enemy worms while eating doughnuts and ice cream to increase your length.
    Each worm has ten lives and loses one by running into a wall, another worm,
    or itself. The enemy worms are after the same bonuses that you are, so be
-   careful: if they become too large, you won't have much room to manuever.
+   careful: if they become too large, you won't have much room for movement.
   </_p>
   <_p>
    The adventure progresses through 26 maps of increasing difficulty. The early
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   </_p>
   <_p>
    Play on your own against up to five enemy worms, or share your keyboard to
-   let one or more friends join the fun.
+   play with a friend.
   </_p>
  </description>
  <screenshots>


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