[gnome-nibbles] appdata: reword the description a bit
- From: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-nibbles] appdata: reword the description a bit
- Date: Sun, 6 Oct 2013 14:38:14 +0000 (UTC)
commit e39c1c0dc55cbe8fa737d065753e89e96625199c
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date: Sun Oct 6 09:35:36 2013 -0500
appdata: reword the description a bit
* Nit: the word "manuever" twice in the same paragraph is weak
* Probably Nibbles will be restricted to two players per keyboard
data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in | 4 ++--
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in b/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
index ad2be27..2311573 100644
--- a/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
+++ b/data/gnome-nibbles.appdata.xml.in
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
enemy worms while eating doughnuts and ice cream to increase your length.
Each worm has ten lives and loses one by running into a wall, another worm,
or itself. The enemy worms are after the same bonuses that you are, so be
- careful: if they become too large, you won't have much room to manuever.
+ careful: if they become too large, you won't have much room for movement.
</_p>
<_p>
The adventure progresses through 26 maps of increasing difficulty. The early
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
</_p>
<_p>
Play on your own against up to five enemy worms, or share your keyboard to
- let one or more friends join the fun.
+ play with a friend.
</_p>
</description>
<screenshots>
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