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[gnome-user-docs] Updated more net-wireless-* pages for 3.10

commit 316ae866045628d7624663220af42f946e610341
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Nov 11 13:43:05 2013 -0500

    Updated more net-wireless-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page                |   67 ++++++++++++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page           |   65 ++++++++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page         |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page |   11 +++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page              |    3 +-
 5 files changed, 111 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 7e45e7a..8013dce 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-manual">
   <info>
@@ -6,48 +7,80 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
-      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>If network settings don't get assigned automatically, you may have to enter them yourself.</desc>
+    <desc>You may have to enter network settings if they don't get assigned
+    automatically.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Manually set network settings</title>
 
-<p>If your network doesn't automatically assign network settings to your computer, you may have to manually 
enter the settings yourself. This topic assumes that you already know the correct settings to use. If not, 
you may need to ask your network administrator or look at the settings of your router or network switch.</p>
+<p>If your network doesn't automatically assign network settings to your
+ computer, you may have to manually enter the settings yourself. This topic
+ assumes that you already know the correct settings to use. If not, you may
+ need to ask your network administrator or look at the settings of your router
+ or network switch.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <title>To manually set your network settings:</title>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>Select the network connection that you want to set up manually and click <gui>Configure</gui>. For 
example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, look at <gui>Wired</gui>.</p>
-  <p>Make sure that your wireless card is turned on or a network cable is plugged in. Otherwise, you won't 
be able to click <gui>Configure</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui> to open the control center.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP 
address</em> into the corresponding columns of the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> or 
<key>Tab</key> after typing each address.</p>
-  <p>These three addresses must be IP addresses; that is, they must be four numbers separated by periods 
(e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
+  <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to set up
+ manually and click the
+ <media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg">settings</media>
+ button. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, click
+ <gui>Wired</gui>. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
+ <media type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg">settings</media>
+ button will be located next to the active network.</p>
+  <p>Make sure that your wireless card is turned on or a network cable is
+ plugged in.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use in the corresponding field, separated by 
commas.</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>IPv4</gui> and change <gui>Addresses</gui> to
+ <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>Type in the <gui>Address</gui> and <gui>Gateway</gui>, as well as the
+ appropriate <gui>Netmask</gui>.</p>
+  <p>These must be <em>IP addresses</em>; that is, they must be four numbers
+ separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>In the <gui>DNS</gui> section, switch <gui>Automatic</gui> to
+ <gui>OFF</gui>. Enter the IP address of a DNS servers you want to use. Enter
+ additional DNS server addresses using the <key>+</key> button.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>In the <gui>Routes</gui> section, switch <gui>Automatic</gui> to
+ <gui>OFF</gui>. Enter the the <gui>Address</gui>, <gui>Netmask</gui>,
+ <gui>Gateway</gui> and <gui>Metric</gui> for a route you want to use. Enter
+ additional routes using the <key>+</key> button.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, click the network icon on the top bar 
and connect. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, 
for example.</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, click the
+ system status area on the top bar and connect. Test the network settings by
+ trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p>
  </item>
 
 </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index bdd11a0..d5670cf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -1,40 +1,69 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-vpn-connect">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>VPNs allow you to connect to a local network over the internet. Learn how to set up a VPN 
connection.</desc>
+    <desc>Set up a VPN connection to a local network over the internet.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Connect to a VPN</title>
 
-<p>A VPN (or <em>Virtual Private Network</em>) is a way of connecting to a local network over the internet. 
For example, say you want to connect to the local network at your workplace while you're on a business trip. 
You would find an internet connection somewhere (like at a hotel) and then connect to your workplace's VPN. 
It would be as if you were directly connected to the network at work, but the actual network connection would 
be through the hotel's internet connection. VPN connections are usually <em>encrypted</em> to prevent people 
from accessing the local network you're connecting to without logging in.</p>
-
-<p>There are a number of different types of VPN. You may have to install some extra software depending on 
what type of VPN you're connecting to. Find out the connection details from whoever is in charge of the VPN 
and see which <em>VPN client</em> you need to use. Then, go to the software installer application and search 
for the <app>NetworkManager</app> package which works with your VPN (if there is one) and install it.</p>
+<p>A VPN (or <em>Virtual Private Network</em>) is a way of connecting to a
+ local network over the internet. For example, say you want to connect to the
+ local network at your workplace while you're on a business trip. You would
+ find an internet connection somewhere (like at a hotel) and then connect to
+ your workplace's VPN. It would be as if you were directly connected to the
+ network at work, but the actual network connection would be through the
+ hotel's internet connection. VPN connections are usually <em>encrypted</em>
+ to prevent people from accessing the local network you're connecting to
+ without logging in.</p>
+
+<p>There are a number of different types of VPN. You may have to install some
+ extra software depending on what type of VPN you're connecting to. Find out
+ the connection details from whoever is in charge of the VPN and see which
+ <em>VPN client</em> you need to use. Then, go to the software installer
+ application and search for the <app>NetworkManager</app> package which works
+ with your VPN (if there is one) and install it.</p>
 
 <note>
- <p>If there isn't a NetworkManager package for your type of VPN, you will probably have to download and 
install some client software from the company that provides the VPN software. You'll probably have to follow 
some different instructions to get that working.</p>
+ <p>If there isn't a NetworkManager package for your type of VPN, you will
+ probably have to download and install some client software from the company
+ that provides the VPN software. You'll probably have to follow some different
+ instructions to get that working.</p>
 </note>
 
 <p>Once that's done, you can set up the VPN connection:</p>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui> to open the control center.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
-  <p>In the list on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
+  <p>In the list on the left, click the <key>+</key> button
   to add a new connection.</p>
  </item>
 
@@ -47,20 +76,28 @@
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Create</gui> and follow the instructions on the screen, entering details like your username 
and password as you go.</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Create</gui> and follow the instructions on the screen,
+ entering details like your username and password as you go.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>When you've finished setting-up the VPN, click the network icon on the top bar, go to <gui>VPN 
Connections</gui> and click on the connection you just created. It will try to establish a VPN connection - 
the network icon will change as it tries to connect.</p>
+  <p>When you've finished setting-up the VPN, click the system status area on
+ the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> and select the connection you just created.
+ It will try to establish a VPN connection - the network icon will change as it
+ tries to connect.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>Hopefully, you will successfully connect to the VPN. If not, you may need to double-check the VPN 
settings you entered. You can do this by clicking the network icon, clicking <gui>Network Settings</gui> and 
going to the <gui>VPN</gui> tab.</p>
+  <p>Hopefully you will successfully connect to the VPN. If not, you may need
+ to double-check the VPN settings you entered. You can do this by clicking the
+ system status area on the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> followed by
+ <gui>VPN Settings</gui>, then select the connection you just created.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>To disconnect from the VPN, click the network icon on the top bar and click <gui>Disconnect</gui> under 
the name of your VPN connection.</p>
+  <p>To disconnect from the VPN, click the system status area on the top bar
+ and click <gui>Disconnect</gui> under the name of your VPN connection.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index 3558614..14d52b4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@
       <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, there might be too many
-    wireless networks nearby, or you might be out of range.</desc>
+    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, and other places to look.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
index fd07131..41faa7a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
@@ -1,17 +1,20 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="problem"
-      id="net-passwordok-noconnect">
+      id="net-wireless-noconnection">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
-      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Double-check the password, try using the pass key instead of the password, turn the wireless card 
off and on again…</desc>
+    <desc>Double-check the password, and other things to try.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -47,4 +50,4 @@
 
 </list>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
index 5c8ce0e..ae4bd83 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-general"/>
@@ -29,4 +30,4 @@
 <p>Could use some organization</p>
 </comment>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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