[gnome-user-docs] Update outdated pages (a11y-* and clock*)



commit cbc5eca47ce89aca3a48183fc63dd5bfdc071669
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Nov 4 15:12:18 2013 +0000

    Update outdated pages (a11y-* and clock*)

 gnome-help/C/a11y-font-size.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page |    5 +++--
 gnome-help/C/clock.page          |   18 +++++++++---------
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-font-size.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-font-size.page
index e16b369..465f38a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-font-size.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-font-size.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index c21c5f2..a7f93dc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-04" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -25,14 +26,14 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
+    <desc>Display your appointments in the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
   </info>
 
  <title>Calendar appointments</title>
 
   <note>
     <p>This requires you to use your <app>Evolution</app> calendar or for you
-    to have an online account set up which supports <gui>Calendar</gui>.</p>
+    to have an online account set up which <gui>Calendar</gui> supports.</p>
     <p>Most distributions come with <app>Evolution</app> installed by default.
     If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distribution
     package manager.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock.page b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
index c58578e..e38196a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
@@ -1,18 +1,12 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="guide" style="task"
       id="clock">
-  <info>
 
+  <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
 
-    <desc>
-      <link xref="clock-set">Set date and time</link>,
-      <link xref="clock-timezone">timezone</link>,
-      <link xref="clock-calendar">calendar and appointments</link>…
-    </desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -20,8 +14,14 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>
+      <link xref="clock-set">Set date and time</link>,
+      <link xref="clock-timezone">timezone</link>,
+      <link xref="clock-calendar">calendar and appointments</link>…
+    </desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Date &amp; time</title>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>


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