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[gnome-user-docs] Update session-* pages for 3.10

commit f3cb4e9c6897e1eacbaf3bce7655abb3df18faad
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Nov 3 23:11:53 2013 +0000

    Update session-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page |   86 ++++++++++++++++----------------
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page |   16 ++++--
 2 files changed, 54 insertions(+), 48 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
index baba80d..8551d50 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-auth"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -16,19 +17,29 @@
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
       <email its:translate="no">stickster gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can log in to your system using a supported fingerprint scanner.</desc>
+    <desc>You can log in to your system using a supported fingerprint scanner instead of typing in your 
password.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Log in with a fingerprint</title>
 
   <p>If your system has a supported fingerprint scanner, you can record your
-  fingerprint and use it to log in. You must have administrative privileges to
-  perform these steps.</p>
+  fingerprint and use it to log in.</p>
+
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to edit user accounts other than your own.</p>
 
-  <p>First, record a fingerprint the system can use to identify you.</p>
+<section id="record">
+  <title>Record a fingerprint</title>
+
+  <p>Before you can log in with your fingerprint, you need to record it so that
+  the system can use it to identify you.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>If your finger is too dry, you may have difficulty registering your
@@ -36,74 +47,63 @@
     clean, lint-free cloth, and retry.</p>
   </note>
 
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to edit user accounts other than your own.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-      name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Unlock your account using the <gui>Unlock</gui> button in the top-right
-      corner of the <gui>User Accounts</gui> tool.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Enter your password at the prompt.</p>
+      <p>Press on <gui>Disabled</gui>, nexdt to <gui>Fingerprint Login</gui> to
+      add a fingerprint for the selected account. If you are adding the
+      fingerprint for a different user, you will first need to
+      <gui>Unlock</gui> the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the <gui>Disabled</gui> option next to <gui>Fingerprint
-      Login</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select the finger that you want to use for the fingerprint, then
+      <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select an option for the fingerprint you want to register. You may
-      choose your right index finger, your left index finger, or a different
-      finger. Then select <gui>Forward</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Follow the instructions in the dialog and swipe your finger at
+      <em>moderate speed</em> over your fingerprint reader. You should need to
+      swipe your finger at least five times. Once the computer has a good
+      record of your fingerprint, you will see a <gui>Done!</gui> message.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Swipe the finger you selected three times at a <em>moderate speed</em>
-      over your fingerprint reader. Each time the fingerprint reader recognizes
-      your fingerprint properly, the corresponding picture of a hand will
-      transform into a picture of a fingerprint with a check mark. After the
-      third swipe, you will see the message <gui>Done!</gui></p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Forward</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
+      <p>Select <gui>Continue</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
       your fingerprint was saved successfully. Select <gui>Close</gui> to
       finish.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+</section>
+
+<section id="verify">
+  <title>Check that your fingerprint works</title>
+
   <p>Now check that your new fingerprint login works. If you register a
   fingerprint, you still have the option to log in with your password.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Save any open work, and then log out. Select your name in the upper
-      right-hand corner and then select <gui>Log Out</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>A confirmation message will appear. Select <gui>Log Out</gui> to
-      confirm. The login screen appears.</p>
+      <p>Save any open work, and then <link xref="shell-exit#logout">log
+      out</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>At the login screen, select your name from the list. The password
       entry form will appear.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Within 30 seconds, select the fingerprint button above and to the
-      right of your name.</p>
-      <note>
-        <p>The fingerprint button is labeled with a picture of a hand. If the
-        timer runs out, the button will disappear and you will only be
-        permitted to log in with a password. If you want to try again, select
-        the <gui>Cancel</gui> button and return to the previous step.</p>
-      </note>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Swipe the finger you registered at a <em>moderate</em> speed over your
-      fingerprint scanner. You will be logged in.</p>
+      <p>Instead of typing your password, you should be able to swipe your
+      finger on the fingerprint reader.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>If you previously created a login keyring, it is secured by your password.
-  To unlock it, enter your password.</p>
-       
+</section>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index 59df777..2522fb4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -35,23 +40,24 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Press on <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is on, you can change the value
-      in the <gui>Lock Screen After Blank For</gui> drop-down list.</p>
+      in the <gui>Lock screen after blank for</gui> drop-down list.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>If you don't ever want the screen to lock itself automatically, switch
-    <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> off.</p>
+    <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> to <gui>Off</gui>.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
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