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[gnome-user-docs] Update shell-* pages for 3.10

commit 1497d04b34c7d0e079fb3ba1ee9dc7ec02c58c24
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Nov 2 22:51:40 2013 +0000

    Update shell-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page          |    8 +++---
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page  |   29 +++++++++++---------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page |   36 ++++++++++++++++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page   |   30 ++++++++++++++++++++-------
 4 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index d2d2916..a5e8785 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-09-15" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
   </info>
 
-  <title>Log out, power off, switch users</title>
+  <title>Log out, power off or switch users</title>
 
 <comment>
   <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
   as-is. Incomplete for now</p>
 </comment>
 
-  <p>When you have finished using your computer, you can turn it off, suspend it
- (to save power), or leave it powered on and log out.</p>
+  <p>When you have finished using your computer, you can turn it off, suspend
+  it (to save power), or leave it powered on and log out.</p>
 
 <section id="logout">
   <title>Log out or switch users</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index 9bac46b..67ffcca 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-13" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 
 <if:choose>
   <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
-    <media type="image" src="figures/shell-top-bar.png" width="500" if:test="!target:mobile">
+    <media type="image" src="figures/shell-top-bar.png" width="600" if:test="!target:mobile">
       <p>GNOME shell top bar</p>
     </media>
   </if:when>
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@
   <p>The top bar provides access to your windows and applications, your
   calendar and appointments, and
   <link xref="status-icons">system properties</link> like sound, networking,
-  and power. Under your name in the top bar, you can set your availability,
-  change your profile or settings, log out or switch users, or turn off your
-  computer.</p>
+  and power. In the status menu in the top bar, you can change the volume or
+  screen brightness, edit your <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection details, check your
+  battery status, log out or switch users, and turn off your computer.</p>
 
 <links type="section"/>
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
   the top-left hot corner. You can also press the
   <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key on your keyboard. You can
   see your windows and applications in the overview. You can also just start
-  typing to search your applications, files, and folders.</p>
+  typing to search your applications, files, folders and the web.</p>
 
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">To access your windows and applications,
   click the <link xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Applications</gui> menu</link>
@@ -103,10 +103,8 @@
   icon while holding down <key>Ctrl</key> to open a new window.</p>
 
   <p>When you enter the overview, you will initially be in the windows
-  overview.  This shows you live thumbnails of all the windows on the current
-  workspace.  Click any window to focus that window and exit the overview. You
-  can also use the scroll wheel on your mouse to zoom in on any window
-  thumbnail.</p>
+  overview. This shows you live thumbnails of all the windows on the current
+  workspace.</p>
 
   <p>Click the grid button at the bottom of the dash to display the
   applications overview. This shows you all the applications installed on your
@@ -174,8 +172,8 @@
   </if:when>
 </if:choose>
 
-  <p>Click the system menu in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
-  your computer.</p>
+  <p>Click the system menu in the top-right corner to manage your system
+  settings and your computer.</p>
 
 <!-- Apparently not anymore. TODO: figure out how to update status.
   <p>You can quickly set your availability directly from the menu. This will set
@@ -201,12 +199,9 @@ messages will be presented, such as when your battery is critically low.</p>
 </list>
 -->
 
-  <p>The menu also allows you to edit your personal information and change
-  the system settings.</p>
-
   <p>When you leave your computer, you can lock your screen to prevent other
-  people from using it. You can quickly switch users without logging out
-  completely to give somebody else access to the computer. Or you can
+  people from using it. You can also quickly switch users without logging out
+  completely to give somebody else access to the computer, or you can
   suspend or power off the computer from the menu.</p>
 
   <list style="compact">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
index 5b906ad..106b2ba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop" />
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-04-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Marina Zhurakhinskaya</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -58,10 +63,10 @@
 
   <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">The message tray gives you a way to get
   back to your notifications when it is convenient for you. It appears when you
-  move your mouse to the bottom-right corner of the screen, or press <keyseq>
-  <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>. The message
-  tray contains all the notifications that you have not acted upon or that
-  permanently reside in it.</p>
+  move your mouse to the bottom-right corner of the screen, or press
+  <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>. The
+  message tray contains all the notifications that you have not acted upon or
+  that permanently reside in it.</p>
 
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">The message tray gives you a way to get
   back to your notifications when it is convenient for you. It appears when you
@@ -91,15 +96,28 @@
   <title>Hiding notifications</title>
 
   <p>If you're working on something and do not want to be bothered, you can
-  switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
-  <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+  switch off notifications.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Notifications</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Notifications</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Switch <gui>Show Pop Up Banners</gui> to <gui>Off</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
   <p>When switched off, most notifications will not pop up at the bottom of the
   screen. Very important notifications, such as when your battery is critically
   low, will still pop up. Notifications will still be available in the
-  messaging tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom right
-  corner, or pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and they
-  will redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
+  messaging tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom of the
+  screen, or by pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and
+  they will start popping up again when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui>
+  again.</p>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 54589a9..4d47dac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop" />
 
-    <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.4" date="2013-04-23" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,8 +18,14 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Activities, dash, top bar… What are they?</title>
@@ -49,7 +54,7 @@
       <title>Super-Tab window switcher</title>
       <p>When you hold down the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key
       and then press <key>Tab</key>, a <em>window switcher</em> appears. This
-      shows the icons of the applications you have currently open.</p>
+      shows the applications that are currently open.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title>Dash</title>
@@ -61,8 +66,8 @@
     <item>
       <title>Hot corner</title>
       <p>The <em>hot corner</em> is the corner at the top left of the screen.
-      When you move the pointer to this corner, the activities overview
-      opens.</p>
+      When you move the pointer to this corner, the <gui>Activities
+      Overview</gui> opens.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title>Lock screen</title>
@@ -92,8 +97,17 @@
       <title>Settings</title>
       <p>The <em>settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on,
       similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac
-      OS. Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select
-      <gui>Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
+      OS. Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press the
+      <gui>Settings</gui> button to access them. Alternatively, you can open
+      the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>,
+      then select the <gui>Settings</gui> panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <title>System menu</title>
+      <p>The <em>system menu</em> is on the right side of the top bar. You can
+      update some of your settings, find information about your
+      <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, switch user, log out and turn off your
+      computer from this menu.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title>Top bar</title>
@@ -113,7 +127,7 @@
       <title>Workspace selector</title>
       <p>The <em>workspace selector</em> is the list of workspaces that is
       shown on the right-hand side of the <gui>Windows</gui> view in the
-      activities overview.</p>
+      <gui>Activities Overview</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item if:test="platform:gnome-classic">
       <title>Window list</title>
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