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[gnome-user-docs] Update sharing-* pages for 3.10

commit d76839c06dd0699955407e08746296000c0f2040
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Sat Nov 2 14:00:50 2013 -0400

    Update sharing-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page |   27 ++++++++++++++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page   |   14 ++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page     |   14 ++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page  |    4 ++++
 gnome-help/C/sharing.page           |    3 ++-
 5 files changed, 48 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index e80a347..2f60205 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sharing-bluetooth">
   <info>
@@ -9,7 +10,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Set which folders and devices are able to share over Bluetooth.</desc>
@@ -39,14 +40,19 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Share your <file>Public</file> folder over Bluetooth</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sharing</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+
+      <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
+      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
+      network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Sharing</gui>.</p>
@@ -75,14 +81,19 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Allow files to be shared into your <file>Downloads</file> folder</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sharing</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+
+      <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
+      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
+      network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Sharing</gui>.</p>
@@ -109,4 +120,10 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note style="important">
+    <p><gui>Files</gui> allows you to launch the <gui>Sharing</gui> panel
+    directly by clicking the <gui>Preferences</gui> button when you visit the
+    <gui>Public</gui> folder.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index d0b299e..a06b420 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sharing-desktop">
   <info>
@@ -9,11 +10,11 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
-      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Let other people view and interact with your desktop using VNC.</desc>
@@ -39,14 +40,19 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sharing</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+
+      <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
+      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
+      network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Screen Sharing</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
index cdd9aa3..e485ce8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
@@ -1,15 +1,16 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sharing-media">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.1" date="2013-05-11" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Share media on your local network using Rygel.</desc>
@@ -36,14 +37,19 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sharing</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+
+      <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
+      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
+      network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Media Sharing</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index a291a64..9b464d8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -55,6 +55,10 @@
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+
+      <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
+      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
+      network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
index b6c912a..2fae032 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="guide" style="task"
       id="sharing">
   <info>
@@ -13,7 +14,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
-      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
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