[gnome-user-docs] Update clock-* pages for 3.10

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 5db0147f6a15d6c18c624ca236b5273ccf6c9267
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Nov 2 00:52:04 2013 +0200

    Update clock-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |   27 ++++++++++++---------------
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |   24 +++++++++++++++++-------
 2 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 676d643..02f4f51 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,7 +20,7 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> to alter the 
date/time.</desc>
+    <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date &amp; Time Settings</gui> to alter the 
date/time.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Change the date and time</title>
@@ -30,24 +31,20 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date
-      and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
+      &amp; Time Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p>
+      <p>If you have a standard account, you will need to click
+      <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
+      <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator password</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the hour
-      and minute. You can choose the year, month and day from the drop-down
-      lists.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by
-      switching <gui>Network Time</gui> on.</p>
-      <p>When <em>Network Time</em> is switched on, the computer will
-      periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the
-      internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you
-      are connected to the internet.</p>
+      <p>If you have an internet connection, you can set your date, time and
+      time zone to update automatically by switching <gui>Automatic Date &amp;
+      Time</gui> and <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> to <gui>On</gui>.</p>
+      <p>If you do not have an internet connection, you can update these
+      manually by switching them to <gui>Off</gui>, then clicking <gui>Date
+      &amp; Time</gui> and <gui>Time Zone</gui> to update.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by selecting
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 405c16b..4a04d19 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -16,28 +17,37 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Add other timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
+    <desc>Update your time zone to your current location so that your time is correct.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change your timezone</title>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar.</p>
+      <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date
+      &amp; Time Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>If you have a standard account, you will need to click
+      <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
+      <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator password</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p>
+      <p>If you have <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> set to <gui>On</gui>, your
+      time zone should update automatically if you have an interenet
+      connection. To update your time zone manually, set this to
+      <gui>Off</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on your location on the map, then select your current city from
-      the drop-down list.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Time Zone</gui>, then select your location on the map or
+      search for your current city.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>