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[gnome-user-docs] Update sound-* pages for 3.10

commit bed912998303d8267fd5b22188fb35b29fe54421
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Nov 1 22:10:07 2013 +0000

    Update sound-* pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page       |   26 ++++++++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page      |   17 +++++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page |   23 ++++++++++++++---------
 3 files changed, 43 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
index 2643946..56b1b44 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -24,29 +29,30 @@
 
   <title>Choose or disable the alert sound</title>
 
-  <p>Your computer will play a simple alert sound for certain types of
-  messages and events. You can choose different sound clips for alerts,
-  set the alert volume independently of your system volume, or disable
-  alert sounds entirely.</p>
+  <p>Your computer will play a simple alert sound for certain types of messages
+  and events. You can choose different sound clips for alerts, set the alert
+  volume independently of your system volume, or disable alert sounds
+  entirely.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>On the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab, select an alert sound. Each sound
+      <p>In the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab, select an alert sound. Each sound
       will play when you click on it so you can hear how it sounds.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>Use the volume slider on the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab to set the
+  <p>Use the volume slider in the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab to set the
   volume of the alert sound. This won't affect the volume of your music,
   movies, or other sound files.</p>
 
-  <p>To disable alert sounds entirely, use the <gui>On/Off</gui> switch under
-  <gui>Alert volume</gui> on the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab.</p>
+  <p>To disable alert sounds entirely, switch the <gui>Alert volume</gui> to
+  <gui>Off</gui>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
index 5772792..2761e84 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -44,15 +49,19 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Select a default audio input device</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sound</gui> and select the <gui>Input</gui> tab.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the device in the list of devices. The input level indicator
-      should respond when you speak.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Input</gui> tab, select the device that you want to use.
+      The input level indicator should respond when you speak.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>You can adjust the volume and switch the microphone off from this
+  panel.</p>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index 2ed853a..c1ae801 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="sound-usemic"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -39,12 +44,7 @@
   <p>Some computers support multi-channel output for surround sound. This
   usually uses multiple TRS jacks, which are often color-coded. If you are
   unsure which plugs go in which sockets, you can test the sound output in the
-  sound settings.  Click your name on the top bar and select
-  <gui>Settings</gui>, then click <gui>Sound</gui>. On the <gui>Output</gui>
-  tab, select your speakers in the list of devices, then click
-  <gui style="button">Test Speakers</gui>. In the pop-up window, click the
-  button for each speaker. Each button will speak its position only to the
-  channel corresponding to that speaker.</p>
+  sound settings.</p>
 
   <p>If you have USB speakers or headphones, or analog headphones plugged into
   a USB sound card, plug them into any USB port. USB speakers act as separate
@@ -54,14 +54,19 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Select a default audio input device</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sound</gui> and select the <gui>Output</gui> tab.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the device in the list of devices.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Output</gui> tab, select the device that you want to
+      use.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>Use the <gui style="button">Test Speakers</gui> button to check that all
+  speakers are working and are connected to the correct socket.</p>
+
 </page>
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