[gnome-user-docs] Finish net-proxy for the 3.10 update

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 62e97a6d2160ba608381f7bf57767a65247fc629
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Nov 1 20:57:16 2013 +0000

    Finish net-proxy for the 3.10 update

 gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page |   29 ++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
index 40025ed..9706295 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -20,15 +21,19 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>A proxy filters websites that you look at, usually for control or security purposes.</desc>
+    <desc>A proxy is an intermediary for web traffic, it can be used for accessing web services anonymously, 
for control or security purposes.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Define proxy settings</title>
 
- <section id="what">
+<section id="what">
   <title>What is a proxy?</title>
 
   <p>A <em>web proxy</em> filters websites that you look at, it receipts
@@ -50,20 +55,22 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Network</gui> and choose <gui>Network Proxy</gui> from the
-      list on the left side of the window.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Network proxy</gui> from the list on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Choose which proxy method you want to use among the following
-      methods.</p>
+      <p>Choose which proxy method you want to use from:</p>
       <terms>
         <item>
           <title>None</title>
           <p>The applications will use a direct connection to fetch the content
-          on the web.</p>
+          from the web.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title>Manual</title>
@@ -73,15 +80,15 @@
         </item>
         <item>
           <title>Automatic</title>
-          <p>An url points to a resource, which contains the appropriate
+          <p>A URL pointing to a resource, which contains the appropriate
           configuration for your system.</p>
         </item>
       </terms>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>The proxy settings will be applied to applications that use network
-  connection to use the chosen configuration.</p>
+  <p>Applications that use the network connection will use your specified proxy
+  settings.</p>
 
 </section>