[gnome-devel-docs/dx-hackfest] Update the opening paragraphs of the overview

[Federico Mena Quintero <federico src gnome org>]

commit dd6d1187c74894de38f8f51e65e2fe256d9b64e4
Author: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>
Date:   Thu May 23 11:02:39 2013 -0500

    Update the opening paragraphs of the overview
    
    Signed-off-by: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>

 new-platform-overview/index.page |   19 +++++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/new-platform-overview/index.page b/new-platform-overview/index.page
index 0e8985e..701b486 100644
--- a/new-platform-overview/index.page
+++ b/new-platform-overview/index.page
@@ -42,12 +42,19 @@
  <p>GNOME equation</p>
 </media>
 
-<p>GNOME provides a comprehensive developer platform that allows 
-developers to create professional software that is easy to use and 
-aesthetically pleasing. Using the technologies in GNOME, you can create 
-high-quality software to meet and exceed your users' expectations. Here, you 
-can find a high-level overview of the platform, designed to introduce you to 
-its capabilities, and to help you find resources on developing with GNOME.</p>
+<p>GNOME is a powerful desktop environment with a strong focus
+on usability, accessibility, and internationalization.  GNOME is designed to
+be usable by everybody, regardless of technical expertise, disabilitites, or
+native language.  GNOME makes it easy for people to use their computers.</p>
+
+<p>The GNOME platform is a comprehensive suite of tools and libraries
+that you can use to develop graphical applications and other software.
+These tools let you create software that is both easy to use and
+aesthetically pleasing.</p>
+
+<p>This document provides a high-level overview of the GNOME platform
+along with links to reference documentation on each part of the
+platform.</p>
 
 <section id="overview" style="2column">
  <info>