[gnome-user-docs/wip/system-admin-guide-20130514: 2/20] Modified according to feedback comments

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit aabb650a7cb553aa6fe3d078ac5814b9db0ea07b
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Thu Apr 4 15:28:15 2013 +0200

    Modified according to feedback comments

 system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page |    6 +++---
 system-admin-guide/C/custom-session.page    |   21 ++++++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page b/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
index d93ac24..f3cc59f 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@
     <revision version="0.1" date="2012-07-02" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="appearance" />
 
-    <credit type="author copyright">
+  <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Matthias Clasen</name>
       <email>matthias clasen gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
-    </credit>
+  </credit>
 
   <credit type="editor">
       <name>Jana Svarova</name>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   <p>You can make extra backgrounds available to users on your system.</p>
 
   <p>To do so, install an XML file describing your extra backgrounds in the
-  <file>/usr/share/gnome-background-properties/</file> directory.  Below is a
+  <file>/usr/share/gnome-background-properties/</file> directory. Below is a
   simple example:</p>
 
 <code><![CDATA[
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session.page b/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session.page
index 35e6ea4..737f1c8 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session.page
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
-  <credit type="author copyright">
+  <credit type="editor">
       <name>Jana Svarova</name>
       <email>jana svarova gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
@@ -37,7 +37,9 @@
  <p>To create a custom session with different options, follow these steps:</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Create a desktop file in the <file>/usr/share/xsessions/new-session.desktop</file> file format. 
The content of the desktop file should contain the following entries:</p>
+  <item><p>Create a desktop file in the 
+  <file>/usr/share/xsessions/new-session.desktop</file> file format. The content 
+  of the desktop file should contain the following entries:</p>
   <code>
   [Desktop Entry]
   Encoding=UTF-8
@@ -47,14 +49,17 @@
   <input>Exec</input>=gnome-session
   </code>
   </item>
-  <item><p>Type <cmd>man gnome-session</cmd> into the Terminal to display more information on session 
options and
+  <item><p>Type <cmd>man gnome-session</cmd> into the Terminal to display more 
+  information on session options and
   parameters that can be used with <code>Exec</code>.</p>
   </item>
   <item><p>Save the custom session file that includes various parameters in
-  the <file>/usr/share/gnome-session/sessions/new-session.session</file> file.</p>
+  the <file>/usr/share/gnome-session/sessions/new-session.session</file> 
+  file.</p>
   </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Run the custom session by using the <cmd>Exec=gnome-session --session=new-session</cmd> command.</p>
+  <p>Run the custom session by using the 
+  <cmd>Exec=gnome-session --session=new-session</cmd> command.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
@@ -63,9 +68,6 @@
   root, the new session will be available on the sessions list of the
   GDM log-in screen.</p>
 </note>
- 
-
-
 
 <section id="custom-session-classic-mode">
   <title>Classic mode</title>
@@ -74,7 +76,8 @@
 
 <section id="custom-session-set-up">
   <title>Set up a custom session</title>
-  <p>How to set up a custom session that shows up in the session chooser on the login screen.</p>
+  <p>How to set up a custom session that shows up in the session chooser on 
+  the login screen.</p>
 </section>
 <section id="custom-session-change">
   <title>Change the default session</title>