[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-8] terminology and validity check
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-8] terminology and validity check
- Date: Mon, 13 May 2013 14:20:09 +0000 (UTC)
commit f826d599edb0cac448e192045e5bd23116491561
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date: Tue May 7 19:53:54 2013 +0200
terminology and validity check
gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page | 22 +++++++++++-----------
gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page | 27 ++++++++++++++-------------
gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page | 2 +-
4 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index 50c3047..d1ea530 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
<gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen</p>
<p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Click on the
<link xref="shell-terminology">Applications menu</link> at the top
- left of the screen and choose the <gui>Activities overview</gui> item from the
+ left of the screen and choose the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> item from the
menu.</p></item>
<item><p>Click on the grid button in the dash and find the application you
want to add.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index 18531eb..cbe476b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -38,17 +38,17 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
<p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Move your mouse pointer to the
<gui>Activities</gui> corner at the top left of the screen to show the
- <gui>Activities</gui> overview. This is where you can find all of your
+ <gui>activities overview</gui>. This is where you can find all of your
applications. You can also open the overview by pressing the
<key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
<p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">You can start applications from the
<link xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Applications</gui> menu</link> at the top
- left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> by
+ left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>activities overview</gui> by
pressing the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
<p>There are several ways of opening an application once you're in the
- <gui>Activities</gui> overview:</p>
+ <gui>activities overview</gui>:</p>
<list>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
<item>
<p>Some applications have icons in the <em>dash</em>, the vertical strip of
- icons on the left-hand side of the <gui>Activities</gui> overview. Click one of
+ icons on the left-hand side of the <gui>activities overview</gui>. Click one of
these to start the corresponding application.</p>
<p>If you have applications that you use very frequently, you can
<link xref="shell-apps-favorites">add them to the dash</link> yourself.</p>
@@ -76,12 +76,12 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
<item>
<p>You can launch an application in a separate
- .<link xref="shell-workspaces">workspace</link> by dragging its icon from the
- .dash (or from the list of applications), and dropping it onto one of the
- .workspaces on the right-hand side of the screen. The application will open in
- .the chosen workspace.</p>
+ <link xref="shell-workspaces">workspace</link> by dragging its icon from the
+ dash (or from the list of applications), and dropping it onto one of the
+ workspaces on the right-hand side of the screen. The application will open in
+ the chosen workspace.</p>
<p>You can launch an application in a <em>new</em> workspace by middle-clicking
- .its icon in the dash or in the application list.</p>
+ its icon in the dash or in the application list.</p>
</item>
</list>
@@ -92,8 +92,8 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
<keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq>, enter its <em>command name</em>,
and then press the <key>Enter</key> key.</p>
<p>For example, to launch <app>Rhythmbox</app>, press
- <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq> and type 'rhythmbox' (without the
- single-quotes). The name of the app is the command to launch the program.</p>
+ <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq> and type 'rhythmbox' (without the
+ single-quotes). The name of the app is the command to launch the program.</p>
</note>
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
index 1ef7a20..6b5fe77 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
@@ -29,22 +29,23 @@
<section id="what">
<title>What is a notification?</title>
<p>If an application or a system component wants to get your attention, a
- notification will be shown at the bottom of the screen.</p>
+ notification will be shown at the bottom of the screen.</p>
<p>For example, if you get a new chat message, plug in an external device
- (like a USB stick), new updates are available for your computer, or your
- computer’s battery is low, you will get a notification informing you.</p>
+ (like a USB stick), new updates are available for your computer, or your
+ computer’s battery is low, you will get a notification informing you.</p>
<p>To minimize distraction, some notifications first appear as a single
- line. You can move your mouse over them to see their full content.</p>
+ line. You can move your mouse over them to see their full content.</p>
<media type="image" width="700" src="figures/shell-notification.png"/>
<p>Other notifications have selectable option buttons. To close one of these
- notifications without selecting one of its options, click the close button.</p>
+ notifications without selecting one of its options, click the close button.</p>
<media type="image" width="500" src="figures/notification-buttons.png"/>
<p>Clicking the close button on some notifications dismisses them. Others,
- like Rhythmbox or your chat application, will stay hidden in the message tray.</p>
+ like Rhythmbox or your chat application, will stay hidden in the message
+ tray.</p>
</section>
@@ -68,9 +69,9 @@
you have not acted upon or that permanently reside in it.</p>
<p>You can view the notifications by clicking on the message tray items. These
- are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
- given special treatment, and are represented by the individual contacts who sent
- you the chat messages.</p>
+ are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
+ given special treatment, and are represented by the individual contacts who sent
+ you the chat messages.</p>
<p>You can close the message tray by pressing
<keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq> again or <key>Esc</key>.</p>
@@ -85,9 +86,9 @@
<section id="hidenotifications">
<title>Hiding notifications</title>
- <p>If you're working on something and don't want to be bothered, you can
- switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
- <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+ <p>If you're working on something and do not want to be bothered, you can
+ switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
+ <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
<p>When switched off, most notifications will not pop up at the bottom of the
screen. Very important notifications, such as when your battery is critically
@@ -95,6 +96,6 @@
tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom right corner, or
pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and they will
redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
-
+
</section>
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
index 7589816..8595514 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
<p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Alternatively, you can switch between
workspaces by clicking the workspace identifier at the right-hand side of
the window list on the bottom bar and selecting the workspace you want to
- use from the menu.</p></p>
+ use from the menu.</p>
<list>
<title>Using the keyboard:</title>
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