[gnome-user-docs] Tidy up shell-workspaces-movewindow page



commit c23629ba2a84155f515575e2c71d6c167931716f
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri May 10 12:31:14 2013 +0100

    Tidy up shell-workspaces-movewindow page
    
    Mark emails as untranslatable. Use consistent markup, as per discussion
    on IRC (<em> for terms, <gui> for GUI elements). Remove duplicate links,
    the page has more than enoug as it is. As almost every line is touched
    anyway, change indenting to two spaces.

 gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page |   89 ++++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 43 insertions(+), 46 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
index a4550bb..17f8eb7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
@@ -1,79 +1,76 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";
       type="topic"
       style="task"
       id="shell-workspaces-movewindow">
 
   <info>
-
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-workspaces"/>
 
-    <desc>Go to the Activities overview and drag the window to a different
-    workspace.</desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-04-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.3" date="2013-05-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
+    <desc>Go to the Activities overview and drag the window to a different
+    workspace.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Move a window to a different workspace</title>
 
- <steps>
- <title>Using the mouse:</title>
- <item>
-  <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Open the <link xref="shell-terminology">
-  Activities overview</link>.</p>
-  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Open the <link xref="shell-terminology">
-  Activities overview</link> by opening 
-  the <link xref="shell-terminology">Applications menu</link>
-  at the top left of the screen.</p>
- </item>
+  <steps>
+    <title>Using the mouse:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Open the
+      <link xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Activities</gui> overview</link>.</p>
+      <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Open the
+      <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities Overview</gui> from the
+      <link xref="shell-terminology"><gui style="menu">Applications</gui>
+      menu</link> at the top left of the screen.</p>
+    </item>
  <item>
   <p>Click and drag the window toward the right of the screen.</p>
  </item>
- <item>
-  <p>The <link xref="shell-terminology">workspace selector</link> will appear.
-  </p>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Drop the window onto an empty workspace.
-  This workspace now contains the window you have dropped, and a new empty
-  workspace appears at the bottom of the <gui>workspace selector</gui>.</p>
-  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Drop the window onto an empty workspace.
-  This workspace now contains the window you have dropped.</p>
- </item>
- </steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>The <em xref="shell-terminology">workspace selector</em> will
+      appear.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Drop the window onto an empty
+      workspace. This workspace now contains the window you have dropped, and a
+      new empty workspace appears at the bottom of the <em>workspace
+      selector</em>.</p>
+      <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Drop the window onto an empty
+      workspace. This workspace now contains the window you have dropped.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
- <steps> 
- <title>Using the keyboard:</title>
-  <item>
-   <p>Select the window you want to move (e.g. using the
-   <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq>
-   <link xref="shell-terminology">window switcher</link>).</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p>Press
-     <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>Shift</key><key>Page
+  <steps>
+    <title>Using the keyboard:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the window that you want to move (for example, using the
+      <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq>
+      <em xref="shell-terminology">window switcher</em>).</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Shift</key><key>Page
       Up</key></keyseq> to move the window to a workspace which is above the
-      current workspace on the <gui>workspace selector</gui>.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p>Press
-     <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>Shift</key><key>Page
+      current workspace on the <em>workspace selector</em>.</p>
+      <p>Press <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Shift</key><key>Page
       Down</key></keyseq> to move the window to a workspace which is below the
-      current workspace on the <gui>workspace selector</gui>.</p>
-   </item>
-</steps>
+      current workspace on the <em>workspace selector</em>.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
 </page>


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