[gnome-user-docs] terminology and validity check



commit ea8fd3ed5a862b3f8f8adc5a2b7585b33d85e1d5
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Tue May 7 19:53:54 2013 +0200

    terminology and validity check

 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page         |   22 +++++++++++-----------
 gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page     |   27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index 50c3047..d1ea530 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen</p>
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Click on the
   <link xref="shell-terminology">Applications menu</link> at the top 
-  left of the screen and choose the <gui>Activities overview</gui> item from the 
+  left of the screen and choose the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> item from the 
   menu.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click on the grid button in the dash and find the application you
   want to add.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index 18531eb..cbe476b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -38,17 +38,17 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
 
   <p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Move your mouse pointer to the
   <gui>Activities</gui> corner at the top left of the screen to show the
-  <gui>Activities</gui> overview. This is where you can find all of your
+  <gui>activities overview</gui>. This is where you can find all of your
   applications. You can also open the overview by pressing the
   <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
   
   <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">You can start applications from the
   <link xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Applications</gui> menu</link> at the top
-  left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> by
+  left of the screen, or you can use the <gui>activities overview</gui> by
   pressing the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
   <p>There are several ways of opening an application once you're in the
-  <gui>Activities</gui> overview:</p>
+  <gui>activities overview</gui>:</p>
 
 <list>
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
 
  <item>
   <p>Some applications have icons in the <em>dash</em>, the vertical strip of
-  icons on the left-hand side of the <gui>Activities</gui> overview. Click one of
+  icons on the left-hand side of the <gui>activities overview</gui>. Click one of
   these to start the corresponding application.</p>
   <p>If you have applications that you use very frequently, you can
   <link xref="shell-apps-favorites">add them to the dash</link> yourself.</p>
@@ -76,12 +76,12 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
 
  <item>
   <p>You can launch an application in a separate
- .<link xref="shell-workspaces">workspace</link> by dragging its icon from the
- .dash (or from the list of applications), and dropping it onto one of the
- .workspaces on the right-hand side of the screen. The application will open in
- .the chosen workspace.</p>
+  <link xref="shell-workspaces">workspace</link> by dragging its icon from the
+  dash (or from the list of applications), and dropping it onto one of the
+  workspaces on the right-hand side of the screen. The application will open in
+  the chosen workspace.</p>
   <p>You can launch an application in a <em>new</em> workspace by middle-clicking
- .its icon in the dash or in the application list.</p>
+  its icon in the dash or in the application list.</p>
  </item>
 
 </list>
@@ -92,8 +92,8 @@ icon to choose a window to focus or get new window. Mention middle-click?</p>
   <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq>, enter its <em>command name</em>,
   and then press the <key>Enter</key> key.</p>
   <p>For example, to launch <app>Rhythmbox</app>, press
- <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq> and type 'rhythmbox' (without the
- single-quotes). The name of the app is the command to launch the program.</p>
+  <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq> and type 'rhythmbox' (without the
+  single-quotes). The name of the app is the command to launch the program.</p>
 </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
index 1ef7a20..6b5fe77 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
@@ -29,22 +29,23 @@
 <section id="what">
 <title>What is a notification?</title>
   <p>If an application or a system component wants to get your attention, a
- notification will be shown at the bottom of the screen.</p>
+  notification will be shown at the bottom of the screen.</p>
   <p>For example, if you get a new chat message, plug in an external device
- (like a USB stick), new updates are available for your computer, or your
- computer’s battery is low, you will get a notification informing you.</p>
+  (like a USB stick), new updates are available for your computer, or your
+  computer’s battery is low, you will get a notification informing you.</p>
   <p>To minimize distraction, some notifications first appear as a single
- line. You can move your mouse over them to see their full content.</p>
+  line. You can move your mouse over them to see their full content.</p>
 
 <media type="image" width="700" src="figures/shell-notification.png"/>
 
   <p>Other notifications have selectable option buttons. To close one of these
- notifications without selecting one of its options, click the close button.</p>
+  notifications without selecting one of its options, click the close button.</p>
 
 <media type="image" width="500" src="figures/notification-buttons.png"/>
 
   <p>Clicking the close button on some notifications dismisses them. Others,
- like Rhythmbox or your chat application, will stay hidden in the message tray.</p>
+  like Rhythmbox or your chat application, will stay hidden in the message 
+  tray.</p>
 
 </section>
 
@@ -68,9 +69,9 @@
   you have not acted upon or that permanently reside in it.</p>
 
   <p>You can view the notifications by clicking on the message tray items. These
- are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
- given special treatment, and are represented by the individual contacts who sent
- you the chat messages.</p>
+  are usually messages sent by applications. However, chat notifications are
+  given special treatment, and are represented by the individual contacts who sent
+  you the chat messages.</p>
 
   <p>You can close the message tray by pressing
   <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq> again or <key>Esc</key>.</p>
@@ -85,9 +86,9 @@
 <section id="hidenotifications">
 <title>Hiding notifications</title>
 
-  <p>If you're working on something and don't want to be bothered, you can
- switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
- <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+  <p>If you're working on something and do not want to be bothered, you can
+  switch off notifications. Just click your name on the top bar and change the
+  <gui>Notifications</gui> toggle to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
 
   <p>When switched off, most notifications will not pop up at the bottom of the
   screen. Very important notifications, such as when your battery is critically
@@ -95,6 +96,6 @@
   tray when you display it (by moving your mouse to the bottom right corner, or
   pressing <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq>), and they will
   redisplay when you switch the toggle to <gui>ON</gui> again.</p>
-  
+
 </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
index 7589816..8595514 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Alternatively, you can switch between
   workspaces by clicking the workspace identifier at the right-hand side of
   the window list on the bottom bar and selecting the workspace you want to
-  use from the menu.</p></p>
+  use from the menu.</p>
 
  <list>
  <title>Using the keyboard:</title>  


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