[gnome-dictionary/mallard-help: 56/58] Review save-definition help page

[Sindhu S <sindhus src gnome org>]

commit f31c5e890c6c095ab7d832ad059311cf69c2decf
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 29 15:54:03 2013 +0000

    Review save-definition help page

 help/C/save-defintion.page |   26 +++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/save-defintion.page b/help/C/save-defintion.page
index 4451226..a39cdc1 100644
--- a/help/C/save-defintion.page
+++ b/help/C/save-defintion.page
@@ -3,26 +3,30 @@
       id="save-text">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
-    <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Save definitions on file.</desc>
+    <desc>Save a copy of a definition to a text file.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Save definitions</title>
+  <title>Save a definition</title>
 
-  <p><app>Dictionary</app> allows you to save definitions for future reference
-  onto a text file.</p>
+  <p>You can save a definition to a text file. This may be useful if you want
+  to use it outside of <app>Dictionary</app>.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To save a definition:</title>
@@ -31,13 +35,13 @@
       <gui style="menuitem">Save a Copy…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Input the desired filename along with the file extension,
-      <code>.txt</code> in the <gui>Save a Copy…</gui> dialog. You can also
-      browse and select the desired directory for the file to be saved
-      onto.</p>
+      <p>Chose where you want to save the definition to and a name for the
+      file. You may want to add a <file>.txt</file> file extention to the end
+      of the file name.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">Save</gui> to save the definition to file.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Save</gui> to save the definition.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
+
 </page>