[gnome-dictionary/mallard-help: 18/58] Submit introduction.page for review.



commit a402edb98f7389066fab15e01b46d92d5f009063
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Fri Mar 22 19:05:36 2013 +0530

    Submit introduction.page for review.
    
    Reword help where necessary.
    Add Dictionary screenshot.
    Update Makefile.am.
    Reflow paragraphs.

 help/C/figures/gnome-dictionary.png |  Bin 0 -> 14635 bytes
 help/C/introduction.page            |   15 ++++++++++++---
 help/Makefile.am                    |    1 +
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/figures/gnome-dictionary.png b/help/C/figures/gnome-dictionary.png
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..4d84bd9
Binary files /dev/null and b/help/C/figures/gnome-dictionary.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 59a1a11..2e1c637 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="introduction">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-06" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-23" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
     <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
@@ -21,8 +21,17 @@
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Dictionary</app> is a program to look up definitions of words and phrases using the DICT server. 
The default DICT server is ???.</p>
+  <p><app>Dictionary</app> is a program to look up definitions of words and
+  phrases using the DICT server. The default DICT server is located at
+  <code>http://es.dict.org</code>.</p>
 
-  <p>If you do not have access to an Internet connection, you can also install a offline / local DICT 
server.</p>
+  <p>If you do not have access to an Internet connection, you can also install
+  an offline <app>DICT</app> server.</p>
 
+  <figure>
+    <title>Dictionary</title>
+    <desc>Screenshot of <app>Dictionary</app></desc>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-dictionary.png" width="700">
+    </media>
+  </figure>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index f28fa75..6660c1f 100644
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -19,6 +19,7 @@ HELP_FILES = \
           text-operations.page \
 HELP_MEDIA = \
        figures/gnome-dictionary-icon.png       \
+       figures/gnome-dictionary.png \
 HELP_LINGUAS = ca cs da de el en_GB es eu fi fr gl id it oc ru sl sv uk zh_CN
 
 


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