[gnome-user-docs] Update screen dimming page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 1e78e455f1de74363e163647ec2c908030877748
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 28 23:44:02 2013 +0000

    Update screen dimming page

 gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub |   62 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 48 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub
index c35738c..4d227fe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-whydim"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="display-lock"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="a11y-contrast"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
-    <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to make it
-    more readable in bright light.</desc>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.4" date="2013-03-28" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -33,36 +33,70 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Dim the screen to save power or increase the brightness to make it more readable in bright 
light.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set screen brightness</title>
 
   <p>You can change the brightness of your screen to save power or to make the
-  screen more readable in bright light. You can also have the screen dim
+  screen more readable in bright light. <!--You can also have the screen dim
   automatically when on battery power and have it turn off automatically when
-  not in use.</p>
+  not in use.--></p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>Set the brightness</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Brightness &amp; Lock</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Adjust the <gui>Brightness</gui> slider to a comfortable value.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <app>Settings</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui>
+      overview.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <gui style="tab">Power</gui> settings.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Adjust the <gui>Screen brightness</gui> slider to the value that
+      you want to use. The change should take effect immediately.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>Many laptop keyboards have special keys to adjust the brightness. These
-    have a picture that looks like the sun and are located on the function
-    keys at the top. Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key to use these keys.</p>
+    often have a picture that looks like the sun. Hold down the <key>Fn</key>
+    key to use these keys.</p>
   </note>
 
-  <p>Select <gui>Dim screen to save power</gui> to have the brightness
+<!--  <p>Select <gui>Dim screen to save power</gui> to have the brightness
   automatically lowered when you are on battery power. The backlight of your
   screen can take a lot of power and significantly reduce how long your battery
-  will last before it needs to be recharged.</p>
+  will last before it needs to be recharged.</p>-->
+
+  <p>To save power, you can set your screen to dim automatically if you have
+  not used your computer for a while.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <title>Dim screen automatically when inactive</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <app>Settings</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui>
+      overview.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <gui style="tab">Power</gui> settings.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Toggle <gui>Dim screen when inactive</gui> to the <gui>On</gui>
+      position.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
   <p>The screen will automatically turn off after you have not used it for a
   while. This only affects the display, and does not turn off your computer.
-  You can adjust how long you have to be inactive with the <gui>Turn screen off
-  when inactive for</gui> option.</p>
+  You can adjust how long you have to be inactive in the <gui>Blank
+  screen</gui> drop down list.</p>
+
 </page>