[gnome-dictionary/mallard-help] Add better introduction. Submit introduction.page for review.



commit 4d6adee8c733f963ddc0041179764a52cc1b1166
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Thu Mar 28 11:31:15 2013 +0530

    Add better introduction.
    Submit introduction.page for review.

 help/C/introduction.page |   15 ++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 2c44683..7658656 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -25,13 +25,14 @@
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Dictionary</app> is an application for looking up term definitions.
-  <app>Dictionary</app> searches for definitions using an online
-  <app>DICT</app> server. The default DICT server is at
-  <sys href="http://dict.org";>http://dict.org</sys>.</p>
-
-  <!--<p>If you do not have access to an Internet connection, you can also install
-  offline <app>DICT</app> server.</p>-->
+  <p><app>Dictionary</app> is a program to search and view definitions of
+  words, phrases for a language or subject of your choice.
+  <app>Dictionary</app> searches for definitions using a <app>DICT</app>
+  server located on the Internet. The default DICT server is at
+  <link href="http://dict.org";>http://dict.org</link>. 
+
+  <p>Start using <app>Dictionary</app> by
+  <link xref="definition">looking up a definition</link>!</p>
 
   <figure>
     <title>Dictionary</title>


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