[gnome-getting-started-docs] Wording

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit 47381cd2c10ec6206d6446be68c058ce5430b4d3
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Fri Mar 22 18:45:22 2013 +0100

    Wording

 gnome-help/C/getting-started.page |   21 +++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/launch-apps.page     |    9 ++++-----
 gnome-help/C/move-windows.page    |   18 ++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/switching-tasks.page |   22 ++++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/use-search.page      |    2 +-
 5 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/getting-started.page b/gnome-help/C/getting-started.page
index bce7527..e8f2cca 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/getting-started.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/getting-started.page
@@ -29,16 +29,15 @@
             the top left of the screen.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="7.5s" end="9.5s">
-           <tt:p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> item.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> icon.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="9.5s" end="11s">
            <tt:p>Click the application you want to run, for example,
             Help.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="12s" end="21s">
-           <tt:p>Use the keyboard to open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>
-                 <tt:span begin="3s">by pressing the <key>Super</key> key.
-                 </tt:span></tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Alternatively, use the keyboard to open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>
+                 by pressing the <key>Super</key> key.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="22s" end="29s">
            <tt:p>Start typing the name of the application you want to launch.
@@ -68,21 +67,23 @@
             the top left of the screen.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="9s" end="12s">
-           <tt:p>Click a window to switch the task.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click a window to switch to that task.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="12s" end="14s">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window along the left side of the screen, grab
             the window's titlebar and drag it to the left.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="14s" end="15s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+         <tt:div begin="14s" end="16s">
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="15s" end="17s">
+         <tt:div begin="16s" end="18">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window along the right side, grab the window's
             titlebar and drag it to the right.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="17s" end="20s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+         <tt:div begin="18s" end="20s">
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="23s" end="27s">
            <tt:p>Press <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/launch-apps.page b/gnome-help/C/launch-apps.page
index f20dce7..989cb3e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/launch-apps.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/launch-apps.page
@@ -32,16 +32,15 @@
             the top left of the screen.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="7.5s" end="9.5s">
-           <tt:p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> item.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> icon.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="9.5s" end="11s">
            <tt:p>Click the application you want to run, for example,
             Help.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="12s" end="21s">
-           <tt:p>Use the keyboard to open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>
-                 <tt:span begin="3s">by pressing the <key>Super</key> key.
-                 </tt:span></tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Alternatively, use the keyboard to open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>
+                 by pressing the <key>Super</key> key.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="22s" end="29s">
            <tt:p>Start typing the name of the application you want to launch.
@@ -60,7 +59,7 @@
   <steps>
     <item><p>Move your mouse pointer to the <gui>Activities</gui> corner at the
      top left of the screen to show the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> item that is shown at the
+    <item><p>Click the <gui>Show Applications</gui> icon that is shown at the
      bottom of the bar on the left-hand side of the screen.</p></item>
     <item><p>A list of applications is shown. Click the application you want to
      run, for example, Help.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/move-windows.page b/gnome-help/C/move-windows.page
index bb8efd0..5502b9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/move-windows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/move-windows.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
             the top of the screen.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="10s" end="13s">
-           <tt:p>When the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>When the screen is highlighted, release the window.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="14s" end="20s">
            <tt:p>To unmaximize a window, grab the window's titlebar and drag it
@@ -44,14 +44,16 @@
             the window's titlebar and drag it to the left.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="38s" end="40s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="41s" end="44s">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window along the right side of the screen, grab
             the window's titlebar and drag it to the right.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="44s" end="48s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="52s" end="58s">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window using the keyboard, hold down the
@@ -95,8 +97,8 @@
       <item><p>To maximize a window so that it takes up all of the space on
        your desktop, grab the window's titlebar and drag it to the top of the
        screen.</p></item>
-      <item><p>When the screen is highlighted, drop the window to maximize it.
-      </p></item>
+      <item><p>When the screen is highlighted, release the window to maximize
+       it.</p></item>
       <item><p>To restore a window to its unmaximized size, grab the window's
        titlebar and drag it away from the edges of the screen.</p></item>
     </steps>
@@ -110,11 +112,11 @@
     <steps>
       <item><p>To maximize a window along a side of the screen, grab the window's
        titlebar and drag it to the left or right side of the screen.</p></item>
-      <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window to maximize
-       it along the selected side of the screen.</p></item>
+      <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window to
+       maximize it along the selected side of the screen.</p></item>
       <item><p>To maximize two windows side-by-side, grab the titlebar of the
        second window and drag it to the opposite side of the screen.</p></item>
-       <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window to
+       <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window to
         maximize it along the opposite side of the screen.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/switching-tasks.page b/gnome-help/C/switching-tasks.page
index 186e03a..4447628 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/switching-tasks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/switching-tasks.page
@@ -30,21 +30,23 @@
             the top left of the screen.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="9s" end="12s">
-           <tt:p>Click a window to switch the task.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click a window to switch to that task.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="12s" end="14s">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window along the left side of the screen, grab
             the window's titlebar and drag it to the left.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="14s" end="15s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+         <tt:div begin="14s" end="16s">
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="15s" end="17s">
+         <tt:div begin="16s" end="18">
            <tt:p>To maximize a window along the right side, grab the window's
             titlebar and drag it to the right.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
-         <tt:div begin="17s" end="20s">
-           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window.</tt:p>
+         <tt:div begin="18s" end="20s">
+           <tt:p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window.
+           </tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="23s" end="27s">
            <tt:p>Press <keyseq><key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key><key>
@@ -83,7 +85,7 @@
     <item><p>Move your mouse pointer to the <gui>Activities</gui> corner at the
      top left of the screen to show the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> where you
      can see the currently running tasks displayed as small windows.</p></item>
-     <item><p>Click a window to switch the task.</p></item>
+     <item><p>Click a window to switch to that task.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   </section>
@@ -94,11 +96,11 @@
     <steps>
       <item><p>To maximize a window along a side of the screen, grab the window's
        titlebar and drag it to the left or right side of the screen.</p></item>
-      <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window to maximize
-       it along the selected side of the screen.</p></item>
+      <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window to
+       maximize it along the selected side of the screen.</p></item>
       <item><p>To maximize two windows side-by-side, grab the titlebar of the
        second window and drag it to the opposite side of the screen.</p></item>
-       <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, drop the window to
+       <item><p>When half of the screen is highlighted, release the window to
         maximize it along the opposite side of the screen.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/use-search.page b/gnome-help/C/use-search.page
index 6b517c9..65513df 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/use-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/use-search.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
      <item><p>Start typing to search. Results matching what you have typed will
       appear as you type.</p></item>
      <item><p>The first result is always highlighted and shown at the top. To
-      switch to the first, highlighted result, press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
+      switch to the first highlighted result press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
     <media type="image" src="search2.svg" width="100%" />