[release-notes/gnome-3-8] fix a couple of factual inaccuracies

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 8205e77615fe4047b5d2316cf60d909029b2432e
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 21 12:15:02 2013 +0000

    fix a couple of factual inaccuracies

 help/C/more-apps.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index 60d9643..7d2d959 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
   <section id="web">
     <title><media type="image" src="figures/web-browser.png"/> Web</title>
-    <p><app>Web</app> has been upgraded to use the WebKit2 engine. This makes the browser faster, more 
responsive, more stable and more secure. It also means that problems in individual pages are isolated and 
will not affect other open tabs. This achievement, which has been in development for over than two years, 
gives GNOME a state of the art web browser.</p>
+    <p><app>Web</app> has been upgraded to use the WebKit2 engine. This makes the browser faster, more 
responsive, more stable and more secure. It also means that problems in pages will not affect the rest of the 
application. This achievement, which has been in development for over than two years, gives GNOME a state of 
the art web browser.</p>
     <p>In addition to this major achievement, <app>Web</app> has a host of other improvements for GNOME 
3.8:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>WebKit2 includes a new plugins system, which means that Flash is now supported. Plugins are 
also isolated, improving stability.</p></item>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
       <item><p>Google Documents can now be edited directly from the <app>Documents</app> 
interface.</p></item>
       <item><p>A new sharing dialog has been added for Google Documents.</p></item>
       <item><p>PDF files from Google Drive can now be viewed.</p></item>
-      <item><p>An animated <app>Getting Started</app> guide has been added.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A <app>Getting Started</app> guide has been added.</p></item>
     </list>
     <media type="image" src="figures/documents-navigation.png"/>
   </section>