[gnome-user-docs] Review/update various mouse/keyboard/settings pgs



commit 51d9affc18139a6ed8910c5478b0910c899e8d0e
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 13 22:01:22 2013 -0400

    Review/update various mouse/keyboard/settings pgs

 gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page         |    6 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page           |    9 ++++++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page         |   15 +++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page            |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page  |   20 +++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page        |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page |    8 ++++----
 gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page            |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/session-language.page        |   28 +++++++++++++++++++---------
 16 files changed, 67 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
index db4685d..419e69d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-bouncekeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -48,7 +48,9 @@
     <title>Quickly turn bounce keys on and off</title>
     <p>You can turn bounce keys on and off by clicking the
     <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and
-    selecting <gui>Bounce Keys</gui>.</p>
+    selecting <gui>Bounce Keys</gui>. The accessibility icon is visible when
+    one or more settings have been enabled from the <gui>Universal Access</gui>
+    panel.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>Use the <gui>Acceptance delay</gui> slider to change how long bounce keys
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
index 80b060c..adfc122 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-dwellclick.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
index 11a42ab..0b6efbe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
index 22fdd3d..1935bed 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -49,13 +49,16 @@
 
   <note style="tip">
     <title>Quickly turn slow keys on and off</title>
-    <p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to
+    <p>Under <gui>Enable by Keyboard</gui>, select
+    <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to
     turn slow keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected,
     you can press and hold <key>Shift</key> for eight seconds to enable or
     disable slow keys.</p>
     <p>You can also turn slow keys on and off by clicking the
     <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and
-    selecting <gui>Slow Keys</gui>.</p>
+    selecting <gui>Slow Keys</gui>. The accessibility icon is visible when
+    one or more settings have been enabled from the <gui>Universal Access</gui>
+    panel.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>Use the <gui>Acceptance delay</gui> slider to control how long you have to
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
index eb3916e..1952691 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -52,13 +52,16 @@
 
   <note style="tip">
     <title>Quickly turn sticky keys on and off</title>
-    <p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui>
-    (above <gui>Sticky Keys</gui>) to turn sticky keys on and off from the
-    keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press <key>Shift</key> five
-    times in a row to enable or disable sticky keys.</p>
+    <p>Under <gui>Enable by Keyboard</gui>, select
+    <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui>
+    to turn sticky keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is
+    selected, you can press <key>Shift</key> five times in a row to enable or
+    disable sticky keys.</p>
     <p>You can also turn sticky keys on and off by clicking the
     <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and
-    selecting <gui>Sticky Keys</gui>.</p>
+    selecting <gui>Sticky Keys</gui>. The accessibility icon is visible when
+    one or more settings have been enabled from the <gui>Universal Access</gui>
+    panel.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>If you press two keys at once, you can have sticky keys turn itself off
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
index 92b9755..0a9c3da 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-cursor-blink.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="a11y-locate-pointer"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Make the insertion point blink and control how quickly it blinks.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
index bfa5cf5..06f443b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-osk.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard" group="a11y"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="outdated"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jeremy Bicha</name>
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
    </p></item>
    <item><p>Open <gui>Universal Access</gui> and select the <gui>Typing</gui> tab.
    </p></item>
-   <item><p>Switch on <gui>Typing Assistant</gui> to show the screen keyboard.</p>
-   </item>
+   <item><p>Switch on <gui>On Screen Keyboard</gui> to show the screen keyboard.
+   </p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>Click the <gui>123</gui> button to enter numbers and symbols. More symbols
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
index 6919049..dab0bb4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-repeat-keys.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="keyboard"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
index 5829755..4b19e6f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/keyboard-shortcuts-set.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="keyboard"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-keyboard-shortcuts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -412,10 +412,11 @@
   </steps>
 
 <note style="note style">
-  <p>
-Note that this setting is desktop-wide and that you can disable it after your made changes by running the 
<cmd>gsettings set org.gnome.desktop.interface can-change-accels false</cmd> command. You can also use the 
<app>dconf-editor</app> utility to do this.
-  </p>
-</note>  
+  <p>Note that this setting is desktop-wide. You can disable it after
+ you make changes by running the
+ <cmd>gsettings set org.gnome.desktop.interface can-change-accels false</cmd>
+ command. You can also use the <app>dconf-editor</app> utility to do this.</p>
+</note>
 </section>
 
 <section id="custom">
@@ -426,8 +427,9 @@ Note that this setting is desktop-wide and that you can disable it after your ma
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Custom Shortcuts</gui> in the left pane, and click the
-      <key>+</key> button (or click the <key>+</key> button in any category).
-      The <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> window will appear.</p>
+      <gui style="button">+</gui> button (or click the
+      <gui style="button">+</gui> button in any category). The
+      <gui>Custom Shortcut</gui> window will appear.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Type a <gui>Name</gui> to identify the shortcut, and a
@@ -443,8 +445,8 @@ Note that this setting is desktop-wide and that you can disable it after your ma
   </steps>
  <p>The command name that you type should be a valid system command. You
  can check that the command works by opening a Terminal and typing it in
- there. The command that opens an application may not have exactly the
- same name as the application itself.</p>
+ there. The command that opens an application cannot have the same name as
+ the application itself.</p>
 
  <p>If you want to change the command that is associated with a custom keyboard
  shortcut, double-click the <em>name</em> of the shortcut. The
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
index 439ddaa..ce29726 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-doubleclick.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="clicking"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Control how quickly you need to press the mouse button
     a second time to double-click.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
index 6b6e714..0ff81ac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-lefthanded.page
@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
   id="mouse-lefthanded">
 <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Reverse the left and right mouse buttons in the mouse settings.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
index 7629cbb..97d3c75 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-middleclick.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
  <link type="guide" xref="tips" />
  <link type="guide" xref="mouse#tips" />
 
- <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-14" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
  <credit type="author">
   <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index e8b0d24..2df1d42 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@
   id="mouse-problem-notmoving">
 <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse#problems"/>
-    <desc>
-    How to check your mouse if it is not working.
-    </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-08" status="review"/>
+
+    <desc>How to check your mouse if it is not working.</desc>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
index 6d57f57..65b7edb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sensitivity.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#mobility" group="pointing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.3" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Change how quickly the pointer moves when you use
     your mouse or touchpad.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
index 474262b..b5c755f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-wakeup.page
@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse#problems"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>If you have to wiggle or click the mouse before it responds.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
index 25f7a69..fa85f06 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-language"/>
     <desc>Switch to a different language for user interface and help text.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="outdated"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -42,17 +42,19 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Open <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> and select the <gui>Language</gui> tab.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Open <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> and select the
+    <gui>Language</gui> tab.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select your desired language.
     The initial list only shows a small subset of the supported languages.
-    If your language is not listed, click <gui style="button">+</gui>.
+    If your language is not listed, click <key>...</key>.
     Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
     support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
     language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
     English.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You have to log out and back in for these changes to take
-    effect. Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>Log Out</gui>
-    to log out.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Respond to the prompt, <gui>Your session needs to be restarted for
+    these changes to take effect</gui> by clicking
+    <gui style="button">Restart Now</gui>, or click <gui style="button">X</gui>
+    to restart later.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>There are some special folders in your home folder where applications
@@ -70,12 +72,20 @@
     language used in places like the login screen.</p>
 
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Change your language, as described above.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Select the <gui>System</gui> tab.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Click <gui>Copy Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Open <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> and select the
+      <gui>Language</gui> tab.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Select the <gui style="button">Login Screen</gui> button.</p></item>
       <item><p><link xref="user-admin-explain">Administrative privileges</link> are
       required. Enter your password, or the password for the requested administrator
       account.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Select your desired language.
+      The initial list only shows a small subset of the supported languages.
+      If your language is not listed, click <key>...</key>.
+      Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
+      support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
+      language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
+      English.</p></item>
     </steps>
   </section>
 


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