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[gnome-user-docs] Some updates to Settings pages, stubbed dimscreen

commit 18b99caf8ec620ff4128b279b197b52b3ea8aa7a
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 9 17:19:05 2013 -0500

    Some  updates to Settings pages, stubbed dimscreen

 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page                   |    2 +-
 ...-dimscreen.page => display-dimscreen.page.stub} |    0
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page    |   10 ++++++----
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page            |   12 +++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/look-background.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page                  |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/user-add.page                         |   19 ++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page                    |   18 +++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page                |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page               |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page              |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page              |   17 ++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page               |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page                      |   13 +++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page                |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                             |    1 -
 17 files changed, 73 insertions(+), 53 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index 5c64377..17ae8f2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page
rename to gnome-help/C/display-dimscreen.page.stub
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
index b839a95..ed9cb06 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <desc>Set up dual monitors on your desktop computer.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
-      <years>2012</years>
+      <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
@@ -27,8 +27,10 @@
   </p>
 
   <steps>
-  <item><p>Type <input>displays</input> in the <link xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</link> 
overview to open the
-           <gui>Displays Settings</gui>.
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
+  </p></item>
+
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.
   </p></item>
 
   <item><p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or deactivate,
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index cebb6e1..26e776d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -4,11 +4,15 @@
 
   <info>
     <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
 
@@ -82,8 +86,10 @@
   </p>
 
   <steps>
-  <item><p>Type <input>displays</input> in the <link xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</link> 
overview to open the
-           <gui>Displays Settings</gui>.
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
+  </p></item>
+
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.
   </p></item>
 
   <item><p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or deactivate,
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
index 8d84ffd..95b38e6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Set an image, color, or gradient as your desktop background.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
index 54ff736..7a0c4a6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
    <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
    <desc>The screen resolution may be set incorrectly.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
index af32fcb..fc34840 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="look-display-fuzzy"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Change the resolution of the screen and its orientation (rotation).</desc>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>If you have multiple displays and they are not mirrored, you can have
-  different settings on display. Select a display in the preview area.</p></item>
+  different settings on each display. Select a display in the preview area.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select your desired resolution and rotation.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The new settings will be applied for 30 seconds
   before reverting back. That way, if you cannot see anything with the new settings,
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ list. If you choose one that is not right for your screen it may
 <title>Rotation</title>
 <p>On some laptops, you can physically rotate the screen in many directions.
 It is useful to be able to change the display rotation. You can choose the rotation
-you want for your display from <gui>Rotation</gui> drop-down list.</p>
+you want for your display from the <gui>Rotation</gui> drop-down list.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 2a54067..6c42976 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <!-- Setting 3.4.0 version to final for release, but we need to do something
          about the various comments in here, so incomplete for 3.4.1.
     -->
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ clear to me what it should do):
 
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>User Accounts</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open <gui>Users</gui>.</p></item>
 
   <item><p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
   to add user accounts. Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type
   your password or the administrator password, as prompted.</p></item>
 
-  <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <key>+</key> button
-  to add a new user account.</p></item>
+  <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the
+  <gui style="button">+</gui> button to add a new user account.</p></item>
 
   <item><p>If you want the new user to have
   <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrative access</link> to the computer,
@@ -80,13 +80,14 @@ clear to me what it should do):
   automatically based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you can
   change it if you  like.</p></item>
 
-  <item><p>Click <gui>Create</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click <gui>Add</gui>.</p></item>
 
   <item><p>The account is initially disabled until you choose what to do about
-  the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click <gui>Account
-  disabled</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. Select <gui>Set a password now</gui>
-  from the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list, and have the user type their
-  password in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields.
+  the user's password. Select the new account from the list. Under
+  <gui>Login Options</gui> click <gui>Account disabled</gui> next to
+  <gui>Password</gui>. Select <gui>Set a password now</gui> from the
+  <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list, and have the user type their password in the
+  <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields.
   See <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>.</p>
   <p>You can also click the button next to the
   <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
index 9215d7e..a3f680e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Allow guests to use your computer temporarily, without having to give
  them a password.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="maintainer">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -21,6 +21,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -36,18 +40,18 @@
   <title>Create a guest user account:</title>
 
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-  name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
+  name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
   password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to add user
   accounts.</p></item>
-  <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
-  to add a new user account.</p></item>
+  <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the
+  <gui style="button">+</gui> button to add a new user account.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Standard</gui> for the account type. You don't want to
   give the guest account administrative access. Then give the account a name
   like <em>Guest</em>, or any other name you like. The username will be filled
   in automatically based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you
-  can change it if you like. Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
-  <item><p>The new guest user account will be selected. Under <gui>Login Options</gui>,
+  can change it if you like. Click <gui>Add</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Select the new guest user account. Under <gui>Login Options</gui>,
   click the label <gui>Account disabled</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. You
   will be presented with a window with password options. From the <gui>Action</gui>
   drop-down list, select <gui>Log in without a password</gui>.</p></item>
@@ -58,4 +62,4 @@
  will be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use,
  or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p></note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 4b865d5..9dca639 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system
  by giving them administrative privileges.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <steps>
  <item>
     <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your name
- to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p>
+ to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
@@ -69,4 +69,4 @@
  Warn the reader about how it's unwise to have too many admins on a system.</p>
   </comment>
        
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index 65ba672..792f86a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
     <desc>You need admin privileges to change important parts of your system.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -72,4 +72,4 @@
  want, or changing important files. This is useful from a security standpoint.</p>
 </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
index f2473d1..62959fa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
     <desc>You can only do some things, like installing applications, if you have admin privileges.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -38,4 +38,4 @@
 
   <p>You can <link xref="user-admin-change">change who has admin privileges</link>.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index d68a93c..a4c59b9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -9,12 +9,16 @@
     <desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often
     in your account settings.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -50,7 +54,7 @@
   you think someone else knows what your password is.</p>
    <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-    name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
+    name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the label next to <gui>Password</gui>.</p><note>
     <p>The label should look
     like a series of dots or boxes if you already have a password set.</p></note></item>
@@ -85,10 +89,9 @@
      checked.</p></item>
     <item><p>In the sidebar under <gui>Passwords</gui>, right-click on
      <gui>Login keyring</gui> and select <gui>Change Password</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Enter your <gui>Old Password</gui>, followed by your new
-     <gui>Password</gui>, and <gui>Confirm</gui> your new password by entering
-     it again.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>OK</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Enter your old password and click <gui>Continue</gui>. Enter your
+     new password and <gui>Type again</gui> to confirm it.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Continue</gui>.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="info package">
@@ -103,4 +106,4 @@
   </note>
 
   </section>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index fbff9a7..4962cee 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
     <desc>Add your photo to the login and user screens.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-    name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
+    name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the picture next to your name. A drop-down gallery
     will be shown with some stock login photos. If you like one of
     them, click it to use it for yourself.</p>
@@ -43,4 +43,4 @@
     </list>
     </item>
   </steps>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index ffa4f39..c19390d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
     <desc>Remove users that no longer use your computer.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -19,6 +19,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -30,11 +34,12 @@
 
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-  name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
+  name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
   password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to delete user
   accounts.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select the user you want to delete and click the <gui>-</gui> button.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Select the user you want to delete and click the
+  <gui style="button">-</gui> button.</p></item>
   <item><p>Each user has their own home folder for their files and settings.
   You can choose to keep or delete the user's home folder. Click <gui>Delete
   Files</gui> if you're sure they won't be used anymore and you need to free up
@@ -42,4 +47,4 @@
   may want to back up the files to an external drive or CD before deleting
   them.</p></item>
 </steps>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index fca7870..a6a65b2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
 
     <desc>Use longer, more complicated passwords.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -102,4 +102,4 @@
  </item>
 </list>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 023e361..3fc6824 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -168,7 +168,6 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        disk-format.page \
        disk-partitions.page \
        disk.page \
-       display-dimscreen.page \
        display-dual-monitors.page \
        display-dual-monitors-desktop.page \
        documents-collections.page \
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