[gnome-user-docs] Updated session-screenlocks page



commit 3fa6c24aa6e24b12564dbffda99a13b6e868a1d0
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 9 11:45:30 2013 -0500

    Updated session-screenlocks page

 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page              |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page        |   12 +++++++-----
 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index 2431428..e83f7a9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     desktop:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select
     <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui><gui style="menu">Privacy</gui>
     <gui style="menu">Usage &amp; History</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index a7776bd..2ae128e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Automatically empty your trash and clear your temporary files after
     a set period of time:</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the <gui>top bar</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the <gui>top bar</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select <gui>Settings</gui> and click the <gui>Privacy</gui>
     icon.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index c82fb61..8e6420a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Change how long to wait before locking the screen in the
-    <gui>Brightness &amp; Lock</gui> settings.</desc>
+    <gui>Privacy</gui> settings.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -33,13 +33,15 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Brightness &amp; Lock</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Change the value in the <gui>Lock screen after</gui> drop-down list.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>If <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is on, you can change the value
+    in the <gui>Lock Screen After Blank For</gui> drop-down list.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
 <note style="tip">
  <p>If you don't ever want the screen to lock itself automatically, switch
- <gui>Lock</gui> off.</p>
+ <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> off.</p>
 </note>
 
 </page>


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