[gnome-user-docs] Review: privacy-purge, privacy-history-recent-off

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 7ce4bbc0fb8429e7225141c1130d5bcbd6277192
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 9 07:28:09 2013 -0500

    Review: privacy-purge, privacy-history-recent-off

 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page |   23 +++++++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page              |   10 +++++++---
 2 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index 5e3af18..2431428 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -5,26 +5,33 @@
 <info>
   
   <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
-  <desc>Stop your computer from tracking your recently-used files</desc>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-02-27" status="review"/>
+  <desc>Stop your computer from tracking your recently-used files.</desc>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-02-27" status="candidate"/>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Jim Campbell</name>
     <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
   </credit>
+  <credit type="editor">
+    <name>Michael Hill</name>
+    <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+  </credit>
 </info>
 
   <title>Turn off file history tracking</title>
   
     <p>Tracking recently-used files and folders can make it easier to
     find items that you have been working on, but you may wish to keep
-    these items private.</p>
+    these items private. To turn off the file history tracking features of your
+    desktop:</p>
 
-    <p>To turn off the file history-tracking features of your desktop, click
-    your name in the top bar, then select
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select
     <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui><gui style="menu">Privacy</gui>
-    <gui style="menu">Usage &amp; History</gui></guiseq> and set the
-    <gui>Recently Used</gui> slider to <gui>Off</gui>.</p>
-
+    <gui style="menu">Usage &amp; History</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> slider to <gui>Off</gui>.</p></item>
+  </steps>
+  
     <p>To re-enable this feature, set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> slider to
     <gui>On</gui>.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index 19e7564..a7776bd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -6,11 +6,15 @@
   <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
   <desc>Set how often your trash and temporary files will be cleared
   from your computer.</desc>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-06" status="review"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-06" status="candidate"/>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Jim Campbell</name>
     <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
   </credit>
+  <credit type="editor">
+    <name>Michael Hill</name>
+    <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+  </credit>
 </info>
   <title>Purge trash &amp; temporary files</title>
 
@@ -23,8 +27,8 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Automatically empty your trash and clear your temporary files after
     a set period of time:</title>
-    <item><p>Click on your name in the <gui>top bar</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Settings</gui> and click on the <gui>Privacy</gui>
+    <item><p>Click your name in the <gui>top bar</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select <gui>Settings</gui> and click the <gui>Privacy</gui>
     icon.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Set the <gui>Automatically Purge Trash</gui> or