[release-notes/gnome-3-8] refine the bit about frame sync

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 4a707c0ea0dd902fe9161bb127cc5bed2fbf3543
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 8 16:02:01 2013 +0000

    refine the bit about frame sync

 help/C/index.page |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 278c9a5..6045905 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 
   <section>
     <title>Improved Animation Rendering</title>
-    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; features a significant technological breakthrough in the way that animated 
graphics are rendered. By improving the coordination between the different technical components involved in 
displaying animated graphics, far greater efficiency and performance has been achieved. The result of this 
work is smooth and robust visual transitions and window resizing.</p>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; features a significant technological breakthrough in the way that animated 
graphics are rendered. By improving the coordination between the components responsible for displaying 
animated graphics, far greater efficiency and performance has been achieved. The result of this work is 
smooth and robust visual transitions and window resizing.</p>
     <!-- See http://blog.fishsoup.net/ -->
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>