[gnome-boxes/wip/user-help: 17/21] Initial content additions to Getting Started pages



commit d89e53f4701415b2036c00bd569b57808226d521
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 25 09:33:00 2013 -0500

    Initial content additions to Getting Started pages

 help/C/create.page              |   14 ++++----------
 help/C/search.page              |   19 ++++++-------------
 help/C/system-requirements.page |    2 +-
 help/C/unattended.page          |   11 +++--------
 4 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/create.page b/help/C/create.page
index 63b9480..332ebb1 100644
--- a/help/C/create.page
+++ b/help/C/create.page
@@ -11,23 +11,17 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>Add a local virtual machine or a remote connection.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Create a box</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2013-02-18" href="mailto:mdhill src gnome org">Michael Hill</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
-  </comment>
+  <p>There are a number of ways to create a box: </p>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
-
-  <steps>
+  <list>
     <item><p>First step...</p></item>
     <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
     <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </steps>
+  </list>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/search.page b/help/C/search.page
index 4d64ad8..6c3a784 100644
--- a/help/C/search.page
+++ b/help/C/search.page
@@ -11,23 +11,16 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>Quickly access a box by name.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Search for a box</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2013-02-18" href="mailto:mdhill src gnome org">Michael Hill</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
-  </comment>
+  <p>If there is more than one box, you can locate a box by name in the
+  <link xref="collection">collection view</link> or
+  <link xref="selection">selection mode</link>. Click the search icon, or just
+  start typing to initiate the search.</p>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </steps>
+  <p>Press <key>Esc</key> to dismiss the search.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/system-requirements.page b/help/C/system-requirements.page
index c70993a..b49a8f5 100644
--- a/help/C/system-requirements.page
+++ b/help/C/system-requirements.page
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>What you need to run Boxes.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set up your system</title>
diff --git a/help/C/unattended.page b/help/C/unattended.page
index 97bf39e..0eedd34 100644
--- a/help/C/unattended.page
+++ b/help/C/unattended.page
@@ -11,18 +11,13 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>Unattended install of a virtual machine.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Express installation</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2013-02-18" href="mailto:mdhill src gnome org">Michael Hill</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
-  </comment>
-
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+  <p>Express, or unattended, installation is available for specific versions of
+  Fedora and Microsoft Windows.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>First step...</p></item>


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