[gnome-terminal] help: review txt-links.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 767017e68e443b73d772f2d1e99f1af62d8b4242
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 3 00:39:33 2013 +0000

    help: review txt-links.page

 help/C/txt-links.page |   33 +++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/txt-links.page b/help/C/txt-links.page
index 8a77953..18e4516 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-links.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-links.page
@@ -3,9 +3,10 @@
       id="txt-links">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-26" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#textoutput"/>
     <link type="task" xref="txt-hyperlinks" />
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-03" status="review"/>
+
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
@@ -17,24 +18,24 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Open links to web and e-mail addresses.</desc>
+    <desc>Open links to web and email addresses.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Hyperlinks and E-mail addresses</title>
+  <title>Hyperlinks and email addresses</title>
 
   <p><app>Terminal</app> parses the terminal output and automatically detects
-  snippets of text that are web addresses or email addresses. Web and e-mail
-  addresses are automatically highlighted when you point your cursor on the text
-  indicating that the link can be opened in an application.</p>
+  snippets of text that are web addresses or email addresses. Web and email
+  addresses are automatically highlighted when you point your cursor on the
+  text indicating that the link can be opened in an application.</p>
 
   <p>For example, you may see <input>http://www.gnome.org</input> or
-  <input>bugzilla gnome org</input> generated as a part of terminal output by
+  <input>username example com</input> generated as a part of terminal output by
   programs such as <app>wget</app> or <app>curl</app>.</p>
 
   <section id="hyperlinks">
     <title>Open or copy web addresses</title>
 
-    <p>Web addresses also called hyperlinks. They can be copied to system
+    <p>Web addresses also called hyperlinks. They can be copied to the system
     clipboard or opened in your preferred web browser.</p>
 
     <list>
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@
         <p>Copy a hyperlink:</p>
         <steps>
           <item>
-            <p>Right click in <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+            <p>Right click on the link in <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
           </item>
           <item>
           <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Copy Link Address</gui>.</p>
@@ -56,7 +57,7 @@
             <p>Right click on the hyperlink.</p>
           </item>
           <item>
-            <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Open in browser</gui>.</p>
+            <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Open Link</gui>.</p>
           </item>
         </steps>
       </item>
@@ -65,14 +66,14 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="email">
-    <title>Open or copy e-mail addresses</title>
+    <title>Email or copy an email addresses</title>
 
-    <p>E-mail addresses can be copied to system clipboard or opened in your
-    preferred e-mail client.</p>
+    <p>Email addresses can be copied to system clipboard or opened in your
+    preferred email client.</p>
 
     <list>
       <item>
-        <p>Copy a e-mail address:</p>
+        <p>Copy an email address:</p>
         <steps>
           <item>
             <p>Right click in <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
@@ -83,10 +84,10 @@
         </steps>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Open a e-mail address in your e-mail client:</p>
+        <p>Send mail to the email address using your email client:</p>
         <steps>
           <item>
-            <p>Right click on the hyperlink.</p>
+            <p>Right click on the address.</p>
           </item>
           <item>
             <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Sent Mail To…</gui>.</p>