[gnome-terminal] help: review app-colors.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 61ac8c9db8ef1c878a08ffcf0cf63eceb0d7522e
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 25 23:06:57 2013 +0100

    help: review app-colors.page

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       type="task"
       id="app-colors">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="draft"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
 
-    <desc>Change colors and backgrounds</desc>
+    <desc>Change colors and backgrounds.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>Color schemes</title>
 
-  <p>For readability and asthetic purposes, you might want to alter colors that
-  <app>Terminal</app> uses for text, foreground and background. You have the
+  <p>For readability and asthetic purposes, you may want to change the colors
+  that <app>Terminal</app> uses for the text and background. You have the
   following options:</p>
 
   <section id="from-system-theme">
-    <title>Use colors from system theme</title>
-
-  <p>To use colors from currently set system theme as <app>Terminal</app>
-  colors:</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui><gui
-      style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system theme</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return to
-      <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
+    <title>Use colors fromi your system theme</title>
+
+    <p>To use colors from the system theme for <app>Terminal</app>, such as the
+    background color:</p>
+
+    <steps>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+        <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui>
+        <gui style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Check <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system theme</gui>. The
+        changed will be applied automatically.</p>
+      </item>
+    </steps>
 
   </section>
 
   <section id="built-in-schemes">
     <title>Built-in schemes</title>
 
-  <p><app>Terminal</app> has built-in color schemes for you to choose from. You
-  can choose from <gui>Black on light yellow</gui>, <gui>Black on white</gui>,
-  <gui>Gray on black</gui>, <gui>Green on black</gui>, <gui>White on black</gui>
-  or set a custom color scheme. To set any of the built-in schemes:</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui><gui
-      style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Choose the desired color scheme from <gui>Built-in schemes</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>If you have selected <gui>Custom</gui>, see <link xref="#custom-color-
-      scheme"/>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Color scheme choices are applied immediately. Click <gui
-      style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return to
-      <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
+    <p><app>Terminal</app> has built-in color schemes for you to choose from.
+    You can choose from <gui>Black on light yellow</gui>, <gui>Black on
+    white</gui>, <gui>Gray on black</gui>, <gui>Green on black</gui>,
+    <gui>White on black</gui>. To set any of the built-in schemes:</p>
+
+    <steps>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+        <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui>
+        <gui style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Choose the desired color scheme from <gui>Built-in schemes</gui> or
+        select <link xref="#custom-color-scheme"><gui>Custom</gui></link>.
+        Color scheme choices are applied immediately. Click
+        <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return to
+        <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+        <note>
+          <p>Sometimes, the color of bold text will be selected form the
+          palette instead of the color that is set as the
+          <gui>Bold color</gui>.</p>
+       </note>
+      </item>
+    </steps>
 
   </section>
 
   <section id="custom-color-scheme">
     <title>Custom color scheme</title>
 
-  <p>You can set custom color schemes by changing the colors for text,
-  background and foreground from a color picker.</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui><gui
-      style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Custom</gui> from <gui style="group">Built-in
-      schemes:</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click on the color sample next to any of the desired component you'd
-      like to change.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Choose your desired color from the color sample blocks and click <gui
-      style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>If you wish to select a color from the color picker, click on <gui
-      style="button">+</gui>. You can either input the desired color by typing
-      in the hexadecimal color code or drag the slider to the left to adjust the
-      colors and click on the desired color in the color picker.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return to
-      <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
-
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>You may also alter a color when you have choosen a built-in scheme by
-    clicking on the color sample block, once changes, the choice for built-in
-    schemes will switch to <gui>Custom</gui>.</p>
-  </note>
+    <p>You can set custom color schemes by changing the colors for text,
+    background and foreground from a color picker.</p>
+
+    <steps>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+        <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui>
+        <gui style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <gui>Custom</gui> from <gui style="group">Built-in
+        schemes</gui>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Click on the color sample next to the component which you would like
+        to change.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <!-- Note to self: check UI -->
+        <p>Choose your desired color from the color sample blocks and click
+        <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>If you wish to select a color from the color picker, click on
+        <gui style="button">+</gui>. You can either input the desired color by
+        typing in the hexadecimal color code or drag the slider to the left to
+        adjust the colors and click on the desired color in the color
+        picker.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return
+        to <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+      </item>
+    </steps>
+
+    <note style="tip">
+      <p>You may also alter a color when you have chosen a built-in scheme by
+      clicking on the color sample block. Once changed, your selection in the
+      built-in scheme chooser will change to <gui>Custom</gui>.</p>
+    </note>
 
   </section>
 
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+</page>