[gnome-terminal] help: review gs-execute-commands.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit fd633043bf573b4a712c6624f75c0fdb2154f954
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 16:04:40 2013 +0100

    help: review gs-execute-commands.page

 help/C/gs-execute-commands.page |   22 +++++++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
index 99406fd..9f80d54 100644
--- a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
+++ b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
@@ -25,27 +25,31 @@
   <title>Execute a command</title>
 
   <p>Any input entered in the <app>Terminal</app> to be executed is referred to
-  as a command. You can run both command line and Graphical User Interface (GUI)
-  programs in <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+  as a command. You can run both command line and graphical user interface
+  (GUI) programs from the terminal.</p>
 
-  <p>To execute commands using <app>Terminal</app>:</p>
+  <p>To execute commands:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Type the command in the <app>Terminal</app> prompt.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
+      <p>Press <key>Enter</key> to execute it.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>Programs may end abruptly without any warning or error message. You can run
-  such GUI programs using <app>Terminal</app> to allow the program to output any
-  error or debugging messages to the <app>Terminal</app>. This information is
-  helpful in filing a bug report.</p>
+  <p>You may want to run programs in the terminal if they end abruptly without
+  any warning or error message: running these programs using
+  <app>Terminal</app> will allow the program to output any error or debugging
+  messages to the <app>Terminal</app> window.  This information can be helpful
+  when filing a bug report.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Programs can be installed at different locations on your computer. If
+    <!-- This is incorrect because one can run a program by specifying its
+    location. For example, './program' if the user is in the correct
+    directory. -->
+    <p>Programs can be installed to different locations on your computer. If
     these locations are not added to the <code>PATH</code> variable of your
     computer, <app>Terminal</app> will not be able to run the desired program.
     To find out where the program is installed on your computer, type