[gnome-terminal] help: Modified txt-hyperlinks.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 90ff51fa6a1a0069ca700a8620135f889d340599
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Thu Feb 21 13:59:47 2013 +0530

    help: Modified txt-hyperlinks.page
    
    Removed review notes after reading them.
    Re-worded help.

 help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page |   24 +++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
index 5256593..f81def6 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
@@ -17,32 +17,26 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-<!-- You should always specify what type of browser you are talking about
-     because apart from web browsers, there are file browsers, photo browsers,
-     etc. -->
-
     <desc>Open links in a web browser.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Hyperlinks</title>
 
-<!-- Don't use apt-get in the example as it is Ubuntu specific, the other two
-     examples are fine as they are not. Remember that apps need to be in <app>
-     tags! -->
-
   <p>You may see hyperlinks (for example, http://www.gnome.org) in
-  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as
-  wget or curl. You may want to open these links in your web browser. You can do
-  the following actions on hyperlinks in <app>Terminal</app>:</p>
+  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as wget or
+  curl. You may want to open these links in your web browser.</p>
+
+  <p>You can do the following operations on hyperlinks:</p>
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Copy the hyperlink: to copy the hyperlink from <app>Terminal</app>,
-      right click and select <gui style="menuitem">Copy Link Address</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Copy the hyperlink address: Right click in <app>Terminal</app> and
+      select <gui style="menuitem">Copy Link Address</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the hyperlink in your web browser: right click on the hyperlink
-      and select <gui style="menuitem">Open in browser</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the hyperlink in your web browser: Right click in
+      <app>Terminal</app> on the hyperlink and select <gui style="menuitem">Open
+      in browser</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </list>