[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 242/283] Help: review of app-colors

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 3e335b294517443e9e627b06d347ae5e62743434
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 17:20:34 2013 -0500

    Help: review of app-colors

 help/C/app-colors.page |   25 +++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-colors.page b/help/C/app-colors.page
index 8b623a4..b0105d6 100644
--- a/help/C/app-colors.page
+++ b/help/C/app-colors.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic"
       id="app-colors">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
 
@@ -27,6 +32,7 @@
   change the colors that are used for the text and background. You can use
   colors from your theme, select one of the presets or use a custom scheme.</p>
 
+
   <section id="system-theme">
     <title>Use colors from your system theme</title>
 
@@ -66,7 +72,7 @@
         <gui>Built-in schemes</gui>. Color scheme choices are applied
         automatically.</p>
         <note>
-          <p>Applications can chose to use a color from the palette rather than
+          <p>Applications can choose to use a color from the palette rather than
           the set specified bold color.</p>
         </note>
       </item>
@@ -77,7 +83,7 @@
   <section id="custom-scheme">
     <title>Custom color scheme</title>
 
-    <p>You can use custom colors for the text and the background in
+    <p>You can use custom colors for the text and background in
     <app>Terminal</app>:</p>
 
     <steps>
@@ -89,20 +95,19 @@
       <item>
         <p>Make sure that <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system
         theme</gui> is unchecked. Select <gui>Custom</gui> from the
-        <gui>Built-in schemes</gui> drop down list.</p>
+        <gui>Built-in schemes</gui> drop-down list.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Click on the color sample next to the component which you would
-        like to change.</p>
+        <p>Click on the color sample next to the component you would like to
+        change.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Choose your desired color from the color sample blocks and click
         <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
         <p>If you wish to select a custom color, click on
-        <gui style="button">+</gui>. You can either input the desired color by
-        typing in the hexadecimal color code or drag the slider to the left to
-        adjust the colors and click on the desired color in the color
-        chart.</p>
+        <gui style="button">+</gui>. You can input the desired color either by
+        typing in the hexadecimal color code, or by dragging the slider and the
+        crosshairs. Click <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
         <p>Your changes will be applied automatically.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>