[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 8/47] help: review gs-tabs.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 3b2c35f2e29663fc5b6432935195cb878d76fba2
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 22:30:36 2013 +0000

    help: review gs-tabs.page
    
    Final review before merging to master.

 help/C/gs-tabs.page |   38 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/gs-tabs.page b/help/C/gs-tabs.page
index eb4acc8..eb749d7 100644
--- a/help/C/gs-tabs.page
+++ b/help/C/gs-tabs.page
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@
 
   <title>Manage tabs</title>
 
-  <p><app>Terminal</app> supports tabs. The tab bar appears at the top of every
-  <app>Terminal</app> window as buttons, which you can click to change between
-  tabs. You can open multiple tabs to manage your work in <app>Terminal</app>.
-  This will allow you to multi-task with activities such as running programs,
-  browsing directories and editing text files in a single <app>Terminal</app>
-  window.</p>
+  <p>The tab bar appears at the top a <app>Terminal</app> window that has
+  multiple tabs open in what looks like a row of buttons, which you can click
+  to change between tabs. You can open multiple tabs to manage your work in
+  <app>Terminal</app>. This will allow you to multi-task with activities such
+  as running programs, browsing directories and editing text files in a single
+  <app>Terminal</app> window.</p>
 
   <section id="add-tab">
     <title>Open a new tab</title>
@@ -54,19 +54,23 @@
   <section id="rename-tab">
     <title>Rename a tab</title>
 
-    <p>Default name for a tab is assigned dynamically by <app>Terminal</app>.
-    To rename a tab:</p>
+    <p>Each tab has an automatically assigned title. You can rename the tabs
+    individually:</p>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
-        <p>Right click on the desired tab.</p>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui>
+        <gui style="menuitem">Set Title…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Select <gui>Set Title…</gui>.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>In the input box for <gui style="input">Title</gui>, enter the
-        desired name for the tab.</p>
+        <p>Enter the <gui>Title</gui> that you wish to use, enter the
+        desired name for the tab. This will overwrite any titles that would be
+        set by terminal commands.</p>
+        <note>
+          <p>It is not possible to unset a title once it has been set for a
+          tab. To see the title, you need to allow terminal command titles to
+          be shown in the <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui>.</p>
+        </note>
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Click <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
@@ -86,9 +90,9 @@
       </item>
     </steps>
 
-    <p>Alternatively, you can click on the <gui style="button">×</gui> on the
-    right most corner of the tab or right click on the tab and select <gui
-    style="menuitem">Close Tab</gui>.</p>
+    <p>Alternatively, you can click on the <gui style="button">×</gui> in the
+    top right corner of the tab or right click on the tab and select
+    <gui style="menuitem">Close Tab</gui>.</p>
 
   </section>