[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 36/47] Help: review pref-profiles

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit ac7d6ae357416aa20e93c0430d7e56e45a5494fa
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 3 06:23:07 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-profiles

 help/C/pref-profiles.page |   21 +++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-profiles.page b/help/C/pref-profiles.page
index 84218ad..aebdf52 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-profiles.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-profiles.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="pref-profiles">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-03" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -16,6 +16,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Create, edit and delete profiles.</desc>
   </info>
@@ -24,7 +29,7 @@
 
   <p>A profile is a collection of <app>Terminal</app> settings.
   <app>Terminal</app> supports multiple profiles. You can configure
-  <app>Terminal</app> profiles to <link xref="pref-custom-shells">run custom
+  <app>Terminal</app> profiles to <link xref="pref-custom-shells">run a custom
   command or shell</link>, set a profile exclusively to connect to remote
   computers using SSH or set a profile that launches a <app>GNU Screen</app>
   session.</p>
@@ -36,7 +41,7 @@
       <p>Profile name</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Font and backgrounf colors.</p>
+      <p>Font and background colors.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p><gui style="tab">Compatibility</gui> with Backspace and Delete
@@ -110,7 +115,7 @@
         <p>Set your preferred behaviour for the
         <link xref="pref-custom-exit"><cmd>exit</cmd> command</link>.
         You can also set a
-        <link xref="pref-custom-shell">custom shell</link> in the
+        <link xref="pref-custom-shells">custom shell</link> in the
         <gui style="tab">Title and Command</gui> tab.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
@@ -125,7 +130,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="create-profile-from-existing" style="task">
-    <title>Create a new profile based on existing profile</title>
+    <title>Create a new profile based on an existing profile</title>
 
     <p>You can create a new profile based on settings from an existing
     profile:</p>
@@ -144,7 +149,7 @@
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Set your desired <link xref="#edit-profile">profile
-        preferences</link>, these will be saved automatically. If you do not
+        preferences</link>. These will be saved automatically. If you do not
         update the profile name, the new profile will not overwrite the profile
         that it is based on.</p>
       </item>
@@ -167,7 +172,7 @@
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Set your <link xref="#edit-profile">desired profile
-        preferences</link>, these will be saved automatically. If you do not
+        preferences</link>. These will be saved automatically. If you do not
         update the profile name, the new profile will not overwrite the profile
         that it is based on.</p>
       </item>
@@ -232,7 +237,7 @@
         <p>Select the profile you wish to rename.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Now, click <gui style="button">Edit</gui>. This will open the
+        <p>Click <gui style="button">Edit</gui>. This will open the
         profile preferences dialog for the selected profile.</p>
       </item>
       <item>