[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 258/278] Help: review pref-custom-exit

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 383aaf0dfb643f28c249464d914b9f47108dea01
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 20:18:53 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-custom-exit

 help/C/pref-custom-exit.page |   15 ++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-custom-exit.page b/help/C/pref-custom-exit.page
index aa58521..ff1d66a 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-custom-exit.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-custom-exit.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic"
       id="pref-custom-exit">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="prob-recover-default-profile"/>
@@ -35,8 +40,8 @@
         <gui style="tab">Title and Command</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From <gui>When command exits</gui> drop down list, select one of the
-      following options:</p>
+      <p>From the <gui>When command exits</gui> drop down list, select one of
+      the following options:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
           <p><gui>Exit the terminal</gui></p>
@@ -54,8 +59,8 @@
 
   <note style="important">
     <p>If you have <link xref="pref-custom-shells">set a custom command</link>
-    that non-interactive, have set the exit behaviour to <gui>Exit the
-    terminal</gui> and have set the profile to be the default profile,
+    that is non-interactive, have set the exit behaviour to <gui>Exit the
+    terminal</gui>, and have set the profile to be the default profile,
     <app>Terminal</app> may exit before you can see the output of the
     command.</p>
   </note>