[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 87/278] help: review pref-keyboard-access.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit b453171fc2a3e2ac3518aeb2377833a604d6fdf2
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 15 01:29:12 2013 +0000

    help: review pref-keyboard-access.page

 help/C/pref-keyboard-access.page |   48 +++++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-keyboard-access.page b/help/C/pref-keyboard-access.page
index c48b960..db5cdd4 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-keyboard-access.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-keyboard-access.page
@@ -12,35 +12,47 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Access <app>Terminal</app> menu using keyboard</desc>
+    <desc>Access <app>Terminal</app> menu using a keyboard</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Keyboard Accessibility</title>
+<!-- The title could do with some work, at the moment it is quite
+     ambiguous. -->
+
+  <title>Keyboard accessibility</title>
 
-  <p><app>Terminal</app> menu can be accessed using a combination of keys to
-  navigate to menu options quickly. You can access them in the followng
-  ways:</p>
+  <p>You can navigate around the <app>Terminal</app> menu using a combination
+  of keys. You can access them in the following ways:</p>
 
-  <terms>
+<!-- This needs tidying! -->
+
+  <list>
     <item>
-      <title>Menu access keys</title>
+      <!-- <title>Menu access keys</title> -->
 
-      <p>This will allow you to access <app>Terminal</app> menu by combination
-      of <key>Alt</key> and the first letter of the menu list item. The letter
+      <p>This will allow you to access <app>Terminal</app> menu by combining
+      the <key>Alt</key> key and the first letter of the menu item. The letter
       you can access for the menu is underlined in the menu. For example, You
-      can access <gui style="menuitem">Character Encoding</gui> submenu by
-      <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key><key>C</key></keyseq>. Similarly you can
-      access <gui style="menu">File</gui> by
+      can access <gui style="menuitem">Character Encoding</gui> submenu using
+      <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key></keyseq>, followed by <key>C</key>.
+      Similarly you can access <gui style="menu">File</gui> using
       <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F</key></keyseq>.</p>
 
-      <p>To enable this, go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Preferences</gui><gui
-      style="tab">Keybindings</gui></guiseq> and select <gui
-      style="checkbox">Enable menu access keys</gui>.</p>
+      <p>To enable this, go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
+      <gui style="tab">Keybindings</gui></guiseq> and select
+      <gui style="checkbox">Enable menu access keys</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <title>Menu shortcut key</title>
+      <!-- <title>Menu shortcut key</title> -->
+
+      <!-- When I click F10, I get the same as a left click on 'File' -->
+
       <p>This setting brings up the right click menu inside your
       <app>Terminal</app> when you press <key>F10</key>. It is useful if you
       have hidden the menubar. To enable this, go to <guiseq><gui
@@ -48,6 +60,6 @@
       style="tab">Keybindings</gui></guiseq> and select, <gui
       style="checkbox">Enable menu shortcut key</gui>.</p>
     </item>
-  </terms>
+  </list>
 
 </page>