[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] Help: review pref-login-shell

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 97ed5574d504969afafe93b614a23b334683b517
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 3 07:29:55 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-login-shell

 help/C/pref-login-shell.page |   17 +++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-login-shell.page b/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
index c48b56e..1e7108e 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-login-shell.page
@@ -16,6 +16,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Start a login shell in <app>Terminal</app>.</desc>
   </info>
@@ -27,7 +32,7 @@
   <terms>
     <item>
         <title>Login shell</title>
-        <p>A login shell is a shell given to user upon his login to her user
+        <p>A login shell is a shell given to a user upon his login to her user
         account. This login shell is defined at the time of creation of the user
         account by the super user. It is initiated by using the
         <code>--login</code> option with bash. It starts after a successful
@@ -36,7 +41,7 @@
       </item>
       <item>
         <title>Sub shell</title>
-        <p>Sub shell also called a non-login shell is a shell started after the
+        <p>Sub shell, also called a non-login shell is a shell started after the
       login process without the --login option.</p>
       </item>
     </terms>
@@ -60,8 +65,8 @@
     <title>Start a login shell</title>
 
     <p>You can allow <app>Terminal</app> to start a login shell. The
-    <code>--login</code> will be passed to <app>Bash</app> or your <link xref
-    ="pref-custom-shells">custom shell</link>.</p>
+    <code>--login</code> will be passed to <app>Bash</app> or your
+    <link xref="pref-custom-shells">custom shell</link>.</p>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
@@ -70,7 +75,7 @@
         <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Under <gui>Command</gui> label, select
+        <p>Under the <gui>Command</gui> label, select
         <gui style="checkbox">Run command as a login shell</gui>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
@@ -117,4 +122,4 @@
 
   </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>