[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] Help: review pref-encoding

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit b43155a4471223f484bff090748c3d1490a66930
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 21:02:42 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-encoding

 help/C/pref-encoding.page |   15 ++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-encoding.page b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
index 761440d..44313b5 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-encoding.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="pref-encoding">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -15,6 +15,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,15 +34,15 @@
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>You are working with file or directory names that use characters
+      <p>are working with file or directory names that use characters
       unavailable in your default encoding.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Use an external hard disk that uses different encoding from your
+      <p>use an external hard disk that uses different encoding from your
       system.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Connect to a remote computer that uses a different encoding.</p>
+      <p>connect to a remote computer that uses a different encoding.</p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
@@ -57,7 +62,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="add-encoding-menu-choices">
-    <title>Add more options to the character encoding menu:</title>
+    <title>Add more options to the character encoding menu</title>
 
     <steps>
       <item>