[gnome-user-docs] simplified the privacy-screen-lock.page instructions. marked as candidate.

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit d7c614e808a5dcd0967790bbf37c38944b4e83e4
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 15:06:38 2013 +0100

    simplified the privacy-screen-lock.page instructions. marked as candidate.

 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page |   49 +++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 415dacc..1c2420d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -1,14 +1,13 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic"
-      style="task"
-      id="privacy-screen-lock">
+  type="topic" style="task"
+  id="privacy-screen-lock">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="session-screenlocks"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit#lock-screen"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-02" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Prevent other people from using your desktop when you
     go away from your computer.</desc>
@@ -29,42 +28,32 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Automatically lock your screen</title>
-
+  
   <p>When you leave your computer, you should
   <link xref="shell-exit#lock-screen">lock the screen</link> to prevent
   other people from using your desktop and accessing your files. If you
-  sometimes forget to lock your screen, you may wish to have your computer
-  lock itself automatically. This will help to secure your computer when you
-  aren't using it.</p>
-
-  <p>To set your desktop to lock itself automatically, you need to complete
-  two sets of steps: set the length of time before your screen turns blank, and
-  then set the length of time for your screen to become locked:</p>
+  sometimes forget to lock your screen, you may wish to have your computer's
+  screen lock automatically after a set period of time. This will help to
+  secure your computer when you aren't using it.</p>
 
-  <steps>
-    <title>Set the length of time before your screen turns blank.</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Power</gui><gui>Blank Screen</gui></guiseq>,
-    and change the length of time to your desired value.</p></item>
-  </steps>
-
-  <p>This will set your screen to turn blank when you have not been using it
-  for a set period of time. When your screen is blank, you will not need to
-  enter your password to start using your computer again.</p>
-
-  <p>After your screen has been blank for an additional period of time, it
-  can lock automatically. When your screen is locked, you will need to enter
-  your password to begin using it again.</p>
+  <note><p>When your screen is locked, your applications and system processes
+  will continue to run, but you will need to enter your password to begin using
+  them again.</p></note>
   
   <steps>
-    <title>Set the length of time before your screen becomes locked.</title>
+    <title>To set the length of time before your screen locks
+    automatically:</title>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Privacy</gui><gui>Screen Lock</gui></guiseq>.
     </p></item>
-    <item><p>Make sure <gui>Lock</gui> is switched on, then select a timeout
-    from the drop-down list.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Make sure <gui>Lock</gui> is switched on, then select a length of
+    time from the drop-down list.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>When your screen is locked, and you want to unlock it, press
+  <key>Esc</key>, or swipe up from the bottom of your screen with your mouse.
+  Then enter your password, and press <key>Enter</key> or click
+  <gui>Unlock</gui>.</p>
+
 </page>