[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 212/242] help: review txt-hyperlinks.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 7db949bcf831674bf2fb4e1a6245a6980ff7096f
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 01:13:48 2013 +0100

    help: review txt-hyperlinks.page

 help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page |   15 ++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
index f81def6..9851506 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-hyperlinks.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="txt-hyperlinks">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-11" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-26" status="draft"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#textoutput"/>
     <link type="task" xref="txt-hyperlinks" />
     <credit type="author copyright">
@@ -23,11 +23,12 @@
   <title>Hyperlinks</title>
 
   <p>You may see hyperlinks (for example, http://www.gnome.org) in
-  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as wget or
-  curl. You may want to open these links in your web browser.</p>
-
-  <p>You can do the following operations on hyperlinks:</p>
+  <app>Terminal</app> generated as a part of output by programs such as wget
+  or curl. You may want to open these links in your web browser. You can do so
+  in the following ways:</p>
 
+  <!-- Colons are not considered to end a sentence, only full stops do. Review
+  capitalisation. -->
   <list>
     <item>
       <p>Copy the hyperlink address: Right click in <app>Terminal</app> and
@@ -35,8 +36,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Open the hyperlink in your web browser: Right click in
-      <app>Terminal</app> on the hyperlink and select <gui style="menuitem">Open
-      in browser</gui>.</p>
+      <app>Terminal</app> on the hyperlink and select
+      <gui style="menuitem">Open in browser</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </list>