[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 46/110] help: review pref-menubar

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit d4a24940cc96f9a284f414a378be6ea55f7ebffb
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 05:19:36 2013 -0500

    help: review pref-menubar

 help/C/pref-menubar.page |   12 ++++++++----
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-menubar.page b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
index a475020..0ea75f5 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-menubar.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-menubar">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-21" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="adv-keyboards-access"/>
@@ -25,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <title>Menubar visibility</title>
 
-  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired, this may be useful if you
+  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired. This may be useful if you
   have limited screen space. To hide the menubar:</p>
 
   <steps>
@@ -54,8 +59,7 @@
       style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Tick the checkbox next to <gui>Show menubar by default in new
-      terminals</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Show menubar by default in new terminals</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>