[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 58/175] Help: Modified pref-menubar.page.



commit 17631d0c8b50a3abf0640d9fa3b0e7790504f6e1
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Sun Feb 17 18:37:16 2013 +0530

    Help: Modified pref-menubar.page.
    
    Removed review notes after reading them.
    Added explanation on why user would want to hide Terminal menubar.
    Changed page description.

 help/C/pref-menubar.page |    8 ++------
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-menubar.page b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
index 8568bf5..f29d68a 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-menubar.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
@@ -19,15 +19,13 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="adv-keyboards-access"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="app-fullscreen"/>
 
-    <!-- Menubar is not a proper noun! -->
-    <desc>How to hide and restore the menubar.</desc>
+    <desc>Hide and restore the menubar.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>Menubar visibility</title>
 
-  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired, this may be useful if
-  you use a device with a small screen. To hide the menubar:</p>
+  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired, this may be useful if you have limited screen space. 
To hide the menubar:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -48,8 +46,6 @@
   <p>To enable the menubar by default in all <app>Terminal</app> windows that
   you open:</p>
 
-  <!-- Make sure that you copy the <gui> elements correctly, including any
-  elipsis -->
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>


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