[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 11/45] help: review app-terminal-sizes.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 96501004be3d1eb2cf08e0f2132d1dbe4f0fa907
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 25 23:26:41 2013 +0100

    help: review app-terminal-sizes.page

 help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page |   48 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
index 8580b13..8ad2d63 100644
--- a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
+++ b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="app-terminal-sizes">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -24,33 +24,33 @@
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
 
-  <p>You may require <app>Terminal</app> windows to be of a particular size when
-  you work with certain command line applications that have minimum terminal
-  size requirements in order to display correctly or if you want to view long
-  lines of terminal output with minimal line breaks on your display.</p>
+  <p>You may require <app>Terminal</app> windows to be of a particular size
+  when you work with certain command line applications that have minimum
+  terminal size requirements in order to display correctly or if you want to
+  view long lines of terminal output with minimal line breaks on your
+  display.</p>
 
-  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the following
+  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to some presets
   presets:</p>
   
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in preset sizes, go to
-      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui style="menu">Terminal</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You can choose from the options:</p>
+      <p>Choose one of the following options:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>80×24</gui></p>
+          <p><gui style="menuitem">80×24</gui></p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>80×43</gui></p>
+          <p><gui style="menuitem">80×43</gui></p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>132×24</gui></p>
+          <p><gui style="menuitem">132×24</gui></p>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p><gui>132×43</gui></p>
+          <p><gui style="menuitem">132×43</gui></p>
         </item>
       </list>
     </item>
@@ -59,28 +59,30 @@
   <note style="tip">
     <p>If you have enabled <link xref="pref-keyboard-access"><gui>Menu access
     keys</gui></link>, you can access this menu by pressing
-    <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and then press <key>1</key> to
-    open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80×24</gui> and so on.</p>
+    <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and then pressing <key>1</key>
+    to open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80×24</gui> and so
+    on.</p>
   </note>
 
-  <p>If you require custom size <app>Terminal</app> windows, you can also alter
-  sizes according to your requirements:</p>
+  <p>If you require custom size <app>Terminal</app> windows, you can also set
+  the window size according to your requirements:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Profile
-      Preferences</gui><gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui>
+      <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
-    <p>Select <gui>Use custom default terminal size</gui>.</p>
+    <p>Check <gui>Use custom default terminal size</gui>.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
      <p>You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by typing the
      desired number of columns and rows in the input boxes next to <gui>Default
      size:</gui> for <gui>columns</gui> and <gui>rows</gui>. You can also click
-     on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase and/or <gui
-     style="button">-</gui> to decrease the size.</p>
+     on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase or <gui style="button">-</gui>
+     to decrease the size.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>