[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 60/163] help: txt-save-text.page complete

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit b5870adf3cebc973e54f21ecd5c68dd80d2642d6
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 17 20:13:18 2013 +0000

    help: txt-save-text.page complete

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 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/txt-save-text.page b/help/C/txt-save-text.page
index 1064e5f..9037041 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-save-text.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-save-text.page
@@ -2,39 +2,51 @@
       type="task"
       id="txt-save-text">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#textoutput"/>
 
-    <desc>Save <app>Terminal</app> output as a file.</desc>
+    <desc>Save <app>Terminal</app> output to a file.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>Save contents</title>
 
-  <p>You can save all output of a <app>Terminal</app> tab or window as a text file. This is useful if you 
have to submit the terminal output as debugging information.</p>
+  <p>You can save all the output from a <app>Terminal</app> tab or window to a
+  text file. This may be useful if you have to submit the terminal output as
+  debugging information.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">File</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Go to <gui style="menu">File</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Save Contents</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Browse to the desired directory, enter filename.</p>
+      <p>Chose your desired directory and enter a filename.</p>
     </item>
    <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">Save</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
+
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>You may optionally input a file extension along with the filename. Valid file extensions are 
<input>.doc</input> and <input>.txt</input>.</p>
+    <p>You may optionally input a file extension along with the filename. Valid
+    file extensions are <input>.doc</input> and <input>.txt</input>. This may
+    be useful if you plan to view the file when using another operating
+    system.</p>
   </note>
+
 </page>