[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 203/242] help: review gs-execute-commands.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit c57b654e5b7ebb6b2753f26b6b1f5c0116b08098
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 25 23:43:53 2013 +0100

    help: review gs-execute-commands.page

 help/C/gs-execute-commands.page |   12 +++++++-----
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
index 16e4461..fde4388 100644
--- a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
+++ b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="gs-execute-commands">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#getting-started"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="txt-copy-paste"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="overview"/>
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
   <title>Execute a command</title>
 
   <p>Any input entered in the <app>Terminal</app> to be executed is referred to
-  as a command. You can run both command line and graphical user interface
-  (GUI) programs from the terminal.</p>
+  as a <em>command</em>. You can run both command line and graphical user
+  interface (GUI) programs from the terminal.</p>
 
   <p>To execute commands:</p>
 
@@ -46,10 +46,12 @@
   when filing a bug report.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
+    <!-- Using "see *link*" is poor style, use inline links as below. -->
     <p>Programs can be installed to different locations on your computer. If
     these locations are not added to the <code>PATH</code> variable of your
-    computer, <app>Terminal</app> will not be able to run the desired program.
-    See <link xref="prob-add-to-path"/>.</p>
+    computer, you will need to specify the path to the program or
+    <link xref="prob-add-to-path">add the path</link> to the <code>PATH</code>
+    variable.</p>
   </note>
   
 </page>